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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57
  • From ANON - Bambu on April 07, 2005
    Chapter 41 and 42, are very nice plot advancing chapters that give great exposition as to Dumbledore's machinations. I also like the Anthony Goldstein play for Hermione, it's clever and an extremely useful device to help Draco clarify his own intentions. Of course, he'll have to overcome Hermione's own firmly entrenched belief in her own milquetoast attractions which will be very interesting to see. I am so looking foward to seeing how you handle the Christmas holidays for this couple. There are so many possible options to choose from, and each has a perfectly plausible and intriguing result.
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  • From ANON - Samurai Leprechaun on April 07, 2005
    Yay! You updated!
    I love this chapter especially the end when draco finds out
    Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Erin on April 07, 2005
    This story is wonderfully captivating, I love how you have managed to bring out every character's perspective into light without making it difficult to follow. Your descriptions are perfect as well, I just loved the part about Draco Malfoy learning about thongs and wondering why Victoria's Secret hadn't been discussed in Muggle Studies, it immediately made me think of that scene playing out with a very flustered professor trying to calmly explain the lingirie store. Keep up the marvelous writing, I cannot wait until your next chapter is up.... but I suppose I will have to *pouts*


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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on April 05, 2005
    Sorry for the double-post, but I forgot to say that I laughed with the part in which Hermione saw Draco sleeping like a starfish. First I started laughing at the silly picture in my head of Draco sleeping that way (so adorable!), but then I realised that I myself sleep like that too. So, er... I guess I need to find more graceful sleeping habits. Hm.
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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on April 05, 2005
    I am a terrible reviewer for not reviewing for so long, but I
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on April 05, 2005
    Uh-oh... I smell danger ahead! Draco is so cute, being so possessiv! And Hermione, too - so completely oblivious to what's going on!
    Luna is just cool. She's actually one of my favourite characters in the book (I'm a loony, too, so...). So she thinks Tony has no chance with Hermione? That's good. *grins nastily* Hermione belongs to Draco, go away, Tony!
    Ah, ah, I'm SO looking forward to what happens next! How will Draco deal with his jealousy? And with Tony? And... okay, I'll just wait until next chappie is up.
    *sits back and tries to be patient*
    Cya, CiraArana
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  • From ANON - Ash on April 05, 2005
    Dude, i've been following this story for a long ass time and I just want to say that this story rocks! I love it! Everytime someone talks to me about fanfics I always talk about this one!
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  • From ANON - lilil on April 04, 2005
    Oiiii, I really miss this story! >_
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  • From ANON - Angelina on April 04, 2005
    AHHHHH!! I love this story soo much.

    But on a more civilised (*ahem; serious) note, do you have a beta? I have this pet peeve with grammar (i'm one of the unlucky few cursed with exceptionally good grammar) and your overall grammar is good. I just like to complain about the little nit-picky things! -lol- Anyways, excellent story, you don't rush the plot line or turn the story into one long Dramione shag session for which I am thankful.

    Keep it up.

    ME!
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  • From ANON - keiko on April 04, 2005
    Looooooooove it! I really like your characterisation of Luna, it's spot-on. And I can't wait to see what Draco does about Goldstein and what happens over the holidays. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on April 04, 2005
    I loved the chapter. For a split second I almost felt sorry for Tony, then I read what he's planning to do and my pity was gone. Luna is confusing me what did it mean when it said "She *hated* lying to people"? At first I thought she hated lying to Tony when he asked her if she had a chance to take Hermione for himself, and Luna said yes; but then I went back and I read that *She* is the one that planted the idea in the first place. What could she possibly gain by breaking Draco and Hermione up? I'm axious to find out. I LOVED reading about Draco being jelous, very interesting. As always, you don't disappoint. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Snowe on April 04, 2005
    I like your Luna--she's devious and just a wee bit creepy. I adore her evil scheme to "out" Draco and Hermione through Anthony. It seems to me that Draco has a much clearer idea of his feelings for Hermione than Hermione has about Draco. However, it also seems that Draco doesn't really want her to know how strongly he feels, until he's a little more sure of her feelings in return; he still keeps a bit of distance betweent them by calling her "Granger", and such...He's being very cautious with this relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - genrou on April 04, 2005
    heh, heh, heh. oh yeah anothony definately is going to make it fun. i wonder how much of a shove will come from the push. would more pep find out, will fights break out? ...either way the tony element is now definately going to make it exciting...i could just think of the next prefects meeting ^___^ oh yeah, cant wait.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on April 04, 2005
    As always I love it! Chapter 42 was very enlightening and when draco actually thought the words fuck-a-duck I thought I was gonna fall out of my chair laughing. I can't wait for the next installment of this brilliant fic! Hope you had a good easter!
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  • From ANON - Ava on April 04, 2005
    I love the way you wrote Luna in this chapter. I think she is much more insightful than people give her credit for. And I can't believe how oblivious Hermione is to Anthony's feelings for her, and I'm anxious to see how it pans out now that Draco realizes that someone else is after his girl.
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