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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - keiko on February 10, 2005
I looooove this story so much, I don't even know where to start! I stayed up all night reading chapters 1-20-something (whenever it is they finally do the deed, I couldn't possibly sleep with all that unresolved sexual tension!). I can't wait for the next chapter! Well done.

~Keiko
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From ANON - Lady Vulcan on February 08, 2005
Another lovely chapter! This is definitely one of the best fics I've ever read. Brava!
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From ANON - scifichick774 on February 08, 2005
Showing Pansy's reaction to everything was great. I have my suspicions about Snape's lady friend, but I'll keep them to myself. :) Looking forward to more.
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From ANON - Kylara on February 07, 2005
"She wondered hopefully if their disturbed appearance meant that physical violence had occurred - or even better, hexing?"

Not exactly the brightest crayon in the box, is she? But it was interesting to see that Pansy had realized that Blaise was probably not infatuated with her or something of that sort. Silly girl.

OOOOH! Snape's lady friend AND him finding out about Draco and Hermione on the same day.... you're too, too evil. My heart goes out to you. I guessed that it was Tonks, but then again, you're such a devious writer I wouldn't be the slightest bit surprised if I was wrong.

Now I'm all curious about who was staring daggers at Hermione, now, and since it's probably not Luna... I have absolutely no idea. :P Well, anyway, I look very forward to your latest chapter (I'm such a greedy person) and this story has truly stolen my heart. Until next time :)
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From ANON - slytherinswn on February 07, 2005
I am surprised you would say such a thing . You are every bit as talented as all the other writers out there and I think you have a very high chance of winning. Anyways I won't talk you ear off much longer here are my comments about the chapter. Absolutely amazing,I just love the interaction between Crabbe , Goyle and Parvati and Neville's expression!,priceless. And yes I too am quite anxious to find out just who Snape's lady friend is. Rock on!

~Slytherinswn~
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From ANON - Jess on February 07, 2005
I really wanna know what Tony is going to do about his newfound information and what Pansy's going to do as well. Is she ever going to find out it was Hermione the whole time? Is Draco going to go home for the holidays or are he and Hermione going to stay there? Update soon please! I love this story and I need more! =)
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From ANON - Shannon on February 07, 2005
*Evil Grin* ;-) I did nominate this one for 3 different awards, so you are very welcome! I am sure I am not the only one though!! And do not worry about who you are up against either, this really is one the top stories out there right now! Good luck and I hope to read chapter 41 soon.
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From ANON - Snowe on February 07, 2005
Even though this story has some cliched elements, you have handled the story so well that it feels very fresh and original. You've done a particularly good job with Hermione and Ron's relationship; it was very believable that even though Hermione had been attracted to Ron in the past, they waited too long. It was nice to see that you avoided arbitrarily making Ron evil or inconsiderate, and that he has matured a bit as well. Even though Ron and Hermione aren't right for each other in this story, I do feel sorry for Ron; I think he'll be very hurt when he finds out about Dramione. The smut in this story is just HAWT; witches and wizards must have special sexual stamina comparted to us Muggles. Draco's maturation in sixth year was also good, and I like the way you've developed Crabb and Goyle beyond the stupid lumps that they usually are in fanfic. Pansy is sympathetic and chilling at the same time, and very cunning to boot. The volcano was hilarious. It will be interesting to see how Draco's very callous treatment of Pansy will come and bite him on the ass; I feel that he deserves some of whatever he gets from Pansy. I do have one question--is Hermione using any sort of birth control? While I could see her forgetting it that first night, she is too conscientious to go on forgetting about it after that.
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From ANON - eve/roarke on February 07, 2005
Brilliant chapter, I think Tonks is with Severus.

Pansy's Volcano has a very good chance of winning, the other fanfic writers are most probably saying "Oh no not Bluemidget",
stop putting yourself down, you writing is great.
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From ANON - Bambu on February 07, 2005
As always, Chapter 40, was deftly done. We get to see a bit of Pansy's inner thoughts and her potential for instability and vindictiveness. We also get a chance to see Dumbledore being perceptive, I wonder just what his next manipulation will be, and you've introduced a new potential 'threat' for Hermione.... maybe. All in all, the tension rises and we're not even to Christmas yet. Sigh. So much of the school year to go through (I'm rubbing my hands with glee to think how many chapters you have to go...).
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From ANON - Campy Capybara on February 07, 2005
In a sense, Pansy gets my sympathy for her misguided way of stalking... er... wooing her intended. Still, her perspective at the start of this story was a nice counterpoint to the intensity of the previous chapter.

LOL at the thought of Draco's obvious anger at the 'help' being misinterpreted by Pansy.

Tonks... hmmm... visiting her 'cousin' is she? Now, would the Slytherin she visits be a certain raven-haired ex-professor of hers? heh.
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From ANON - jessica on February 06, 2005
It's taken me an enormous amount of time to finish reading this story. I think I began around January 10th or so. No matter, it was definitely worth the wait. Your story is absolutely wonderful. It's my favorite since I began reading Dramione writing. You have such a wide range of vocabulary use, your depictions of the characters are believable and quite frankly perfect, and your plot is full of the most original and imaginative twists and turns. I'm waiting very patiently like a good little girl, so please update soon, or I will be forced to croak in anticipation. ^^
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From ANON - lorett on February 01, 2005
Dear Bluemidget,

I must say this is truly A FUN story! I've actually passed it up several times in pereusing the pages of Draco/Hermione stories...somehow Pansy just didn't strike my fancy...

But, in reading it over at the Dangerous Liaisons website where your story has been nominated for a few awards I felt compelled to read the competition of my dear friend EgyptsStar.

Her story 'CELEBRITY SKIN' is also up for an award and I wanted to see what she's up against....

Well, although your story is not finished it sure is addicting...I love the sex, it's wonderfully descriptive and the emotions are so beautifully conveyed that I believe every word.

So, I send my congratulations out to you for your nomination and look forward to your next chapter.

I would also like to know if you have an email list that you send your alerts out too when you update the story?

If you do,please add me to the list. - GARDENERLORETT @ YAHOO. COM

If not, then I suppose I will just have to keep checking in...

Hope for the first though!

Anyway, great job! Enjoying reading and your style of writing is breathless, provocative and addicting!

Cheers,

Lorett
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From ANON - Lauren on January 29, 2005
Wow!!! Your story is so well written that almost everything else I read on the site is just Crap compared to yours. I just adore long involved relationship stories with good descriptions and plot. I also like how your vocabulary and writing are on such a higher level than most writers at AFF. I am dying to know what happens next!!!!!!! I must know! Please update with another piece of Ambrosia soon! Thakns a google for your bitchin story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Alarmed on January 29, 2005
This story is positively orgasmic. You've turned me into such a perv! Okay, so I don't blame you whatsoever. Perhaps I'm a bit like Hermione... revealing an unknown kinky side of myself. Well, now I feel like even more of a perv. I think I'll stop trying to use your fic to analyze myself. Now for an actual review. Stylistically, the story is wonderful. The way you capture Hermione and Draco's personalities is superb. Actually, everything about this story is amazing. I can't wait to read more!
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