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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - Bambu on January 07, 2005
Ah, the long awaited evening at the Felton's Arms (I'm sure that you've been inundated with many people enjoying the inside joke at the name... but I keep forgetting to give you kudos for it), and it was well worth the wait. Brilliantly written and handled... especially as you've been able to paint the picture of Draco and Hermione from an outsiders POV. It adds such a lovely touch to their dancing together -- and the very real feelings that they have for one another. I particularly loved the Tonks/Snape interaction, and the dance between he and Hermione. Very nice touches. Pansy is such a vile piece of work, I can only imagine what's going to happen next... not to mention that in response to your author's note, I'm glad that you aren't doing an R&J with Hermione and Draco (it's been overdone to death -- pun intended). I agree about Beatrice and Benedick being forerunners of Hermione and Draco in so many ways. I'm very pleased you didn't actually have to give this chapter the full 60 read throughs to post it, I've been counting they days until Friday.
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From ANON - Kylara on January 07, 2005
Oh, dear, I hope I didn't bother you about Romeo and Juliet. I meant to just tease you, honest ^^;

Anyway, I wanted to say that I *adored* this chapter. They were just so sweet ;_; and I must say, the part that brought a -huge- grin to my face was the sweet scene in which you seamlessly switch to Anthony's perspective. It was wonderful - how ironic for him to be the first 'outsider' (i'm not counting Ginny or the scheming Headmaster) to truly notice the connection the two possess. My heart warmed at the description of the way Draco was looking at Hermione - truly, so sweet. I do feel a bit bad for Tony, but my love for Draco and Hermione far surpasses the pity :P

And I LOVE 'Much Ado About Nothing'; I own it on DVD and can recite lines from it, disgustingly enough. Benedick and Beatrice have such an electric connection - and they try so hard to avoid it, too. :>

Btw - is Tonks the mystery woman? ^^ Hermione's observation made me wonder.. besides, he's so friendly with her ^^ and if Draco didn't realize that Anthony was making an extremely accurate observation as to his feelings for Hermione, Snape, too, could not realize that he's being too affectionate. (Unless of course I'm imagining the whole thing and you're being evil... ::eyes you::)

Last thing I enjoyed - Draco playing footsie. Absolutely perfect adolescent male. Loved it, loved this chapter to pieces, and can feel the upcoming wrath from Pansy steadily building... can't -wait- until next time. :> Best of luck for you until then.

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From ANON - Nellie on January 07, 2005
Lovely chapter! It was excellent... Although I sort of feel sorry for Anthony, it was really nice seeing D/Hr through someone else's eyes, even if that person's hopes and dreams are crashing right before his eyes... Your description of Draco and Hermione dancing together was really heart warming. All the little details.. *sigh* They made the chapter even better!

I have never reviewed before, but I must say, this is one of the best D/Hr fics I have ever read! :) Great job! ^^
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From ANON - ashleyfanfic on January 07, 2005
Brilliant chapter. It's a shame that more people don't give you reviews because of all the fics I've read, this is the one that just sticks with me. I continually think to myself while reading "Why didn't I think of that?" I love the jealousy you're showing in Draco, thinking of Hermione as his. I love that Hermione, while infactuated with him, doesn't allow him to get away with anything. You've done a wonderful job in setting up this wonderful piece of work and I can't wait until the next chapter.

Ashley
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From ANON - nastassja on January 06, 2005
i love the parallels u mentioned in the story, which is great because i love to see other works mentioned. also i never thought tony was going to be the one to realize the d/h relationship going on. update soon! the story keeps getting better and better!
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From ANON - lilil on January 06, 2005
:):)
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From ANON - Asholey on January 04, 2005
Hey, just thought that since this is the last chapter, I'd put a review here. I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!! I really hope you update soon. I'm positively addicted to your story. It's the best Dr/Her smut fic out there. I read it over the course of three nights and actually had to force myself to remove myself from the computer, if that's any indication. So PlEEEEEEEEEEEEEEase update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - lovemenot on January 02, 2005
Do they have a Victoria's Secret in England?

*ponders before shrugging*

Oh well, don't know don't care! Loved it. I did honestly. It is stories like yours and a couple others that I have read that make me want to write. You have inspired me. Now I must wait for my own plot to develop in my head before I get down to my endeavor. Thank you, however. I could only wish that every Fic that I read moves me as much as yours has. Alas, I must wait for your next chapter. I hate that I become so addicted to a story, when I come to the last posted chapter and can only continue my reading once it has been updated. I hate it. I hate it. I hate it. So now I wait, anticipating the Christmas Social as much as if I was actually attending. THANK YOU!!!

-Love Me Not
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From ANON - gem on January 01, 2005
Please UPDATE i love ur story but i hate things not being finished this the best HERMONE/DRACO fic and it would be really disappointing if u dont finish it!

Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE Please UPDATE

I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I love it but Please UPDATE I

ok i think u get my point :-)
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From ANON - Nastassja on December 27, 2004
omg absolutely adore this couple! keep it commin!
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From ANON - J on December 23, 2004
I've been following your story for a while now and i was so upset when i couldn't find it after that crash!! i'm so glad you got it up again. you are an amazing writer; keep it up!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Troi Evans on December 22, 2004
please please update. This is one of the best Hermione/Draco fics I've ever read. Please update I need to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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From ANON - Pinkpig on December 21, 2004
So good - I love him! I love him, I love him, I love him! And he siad GIRLFRIEND!!!! Ahhhh!!! And MAKING LOVE!!!! Ahhhhh! This fic is th ebest thing I've ever read. NO questions asked! I can't wait for teh next update, and I'm also looking foward to the new fic on Christmas morning!
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From ANON - Akasha on December 21, 2004
This is getting sad, I have begun checking each day to see if you have updated :D It's going along so spendidly! I can't wait to see how Romeo and Juliet comes into play (haha, pardon the pun!) and the irony is just too sweet!
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From ANON - flynn on December 21, 2004
dig the chapter, love the story, joined 'sleeping with the enemy' a couple months ago just so i could re-read it when aff was down. i found one small discrepency in this chappie during the scene where draco flys in through the window. somehow hermione goes from wearing a thin cotton shirt to a sweatshirt. probably just me misinterpreting it. i really thought she was gonna give draco head! it goes against her previous feelings, but the boy really deserves it for being so generous in her own oral/orgasm department. and the whole invitation thing was UBER KAWAII!!! not just the 'romeo and juliet' part, but before when hermione was freaking out that they hadn't checked their invitations because they were shagging and draco, who had been denying before that he felt anything but lust for her, got kinda huffy and said he wasn't shagging, but making love with his girlfriend. i know this is all just a recap for the one person who doesn't need someone else explaining the story, but i'm sorry, that just made me all mushy inside. your story is the reason i got addicted to d/hr. ^_^ anyways, i'm really looking forward to your chirstmas fic and the next chapter!!!

lucky charms,

flynn~_^
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