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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57
  • From ANON - flynn on December 06, 2004
    i really love this story. I just reread the entire thing for the third time (and have read some of the more...exciting chapters several more times). anyway, you have a great fic and i'm getting all antsy in my pantsy to see what will happen next!^_^
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  • From ANON - Lulu on December 06, 2004
    I must say that although I am no expert ;) your story is written very well! I can also say that your writing style imitates JKR's very nicely, but I like focussing on the social aspects of hogwarts more than the Voldemort stuff and Harry. Excellent storyline and good character development and nicely intertwined stories.
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  • From ANON - Lara on December 06, 2004
    This is such an excellent fic!
    I love everything about it from the characters to the plot.
    I love the sexual tension between D and Hr. You wrote it so tangible for the 20 odd chapters before they actually got any action that I could have burst into flames just from the foreplay. Oh, your Draco is killer!

    Great work and I look forward to subsequent chapters.
    And I hope the RL is treating you ok. I saw mention of ambulances, hospitals and kids so here's hoping that everything is well.
    If you're interested, I pimped you a little on my LJ: http://www.livejournal.com/users/little_miss_lk/51652.html
    Feel free to come by and check it out because there's more feedback for your fic there!
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  • From ANON - k9artisan on December 05, 2004
    Whoo hooo! I can't wait for more! This has to be one of the best stories on the net and the sex scenes are just yummy! Great job!
    ~k9artsan
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  • From ANON - Kristina Malfoy on December 04, 2004
    Well, I'm so glad I decided to come back and check for your story. I was looking for it during/ right after the site collapse but I couldn't find it anywhere! Thanks so much for reposting it so promptly. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Loreley on December 02, 2004
    For CH20
    Ah, and so Hermione makes her move and dumps Ron. The blurt method never fails! I feel bad for Ron, he's a nice enough guy, but it was good of Hermione to let him down by blaming everything on a busy schedule, even if she did lie. I find it interesting she thinks of going to bed with Draco as having sex and he thinks of it as making love, a role reversal and quite refreshing! I can't wait to see what Ginny has to say to Hermione...and if Draco will be able to find out Ron is history.
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  • From Loreley on December 02, 2004
    For CH19
    First I would like to address the note at the bottom of this chapter. This story is going amazingly well, there are few stories that can hold a reader's interest for more then a dozen chapters, but so far this one hasn't grown the least bit dull. So no, I don't think you are dragging the story out. You have remarkable talent for combining humor, sexual tension and anticipation, take all the time you want! Now, I have to say Draco has definitely fallen under Hermione's feet, to feel like he's cheating on her when they aren't even together! And to leave the party so he could be alone rather then with anyone else. (sighs and swoons). So romantic. I'm glad Crookshanks likes him, I think that'll boost him in her eyes some. Gotta love a man that animals like, after all. But I can't believe he told her he was seeing someone, I mean I know he's just trying to make himself seem less threatening, but that might make Hermione back off...or drive her mad with jealousy. Brilliant.
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  • From Loreley on December 02, 2004
    For CH18
    Ah, I had a feeling Draco would help his team win. Something about the euphoria of love and all that, turns a guy into Superman. It was cute how Hermione oggled him when she shold have been worrying about her team, the girl is definitely hooked. It was also sweet how Draco knew exactly where she was the entire time and didn't even bother hiding the fact that he was looking at her. He's got it just as bad, I suspect maybe worse, considering he seems to have banned the singing of the Weasel is Our King. The only down side is now Hermione is worried about hurting Ron's feelings, kicking him while he's down so to speak. I hope their breakup doesn't ruin all the friendships. Maybe Luna can sweep in and Hermione can graciously bow out?
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  • From Loreley on December 02, 2004
    For CH17
    Hmm, though I want Hermione to ditch Ron for the sake of this story, her breaking up with him will certainly not make it easier for her to resist Draco. The girl is a genius in every area but love it seems. I'm glad she had the moxy to kiss Draco and catch him off guard. You're turning her into a complex, enjoyable character. And I know Draco has an inherent dislike for most things Gryffindor, so it's hilarious that he's gotten off in the Gryffindor stands and under them now like some kind of sexual christening or sacrifice.
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  • From Loreley on December 02, 2004
    For CH16
    Well, that whole chapter was nice and fun. I think kissing with your eyes open and establishing visual contact is one of the sexiest things you can do during a make out session, nice of you to put it in there! (fans self). Hermione is still determined to resist Draco, even after that wonderfully convincing attempt on his part, all because of Ron. The boy has got to go. And I wonder what the two love birds are going to do when they find out they are going to be partnered together. Constantly. Should be fun!
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  • From on December 02, 2004
    Although I'm only on the 2nd chapter I can already tell that this is a good peice of work. I am intrigued! Keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - genrou on December 02, 2004
    i was so happy to see that you did start with the library bit- i was a bit worried when i saw the next up of the last chapter thinking it might just be skipped but i should have known better with you.
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  • From ANON - genrou on December 02, 2004
    oh yes how i loved this chapter.
    "Snape nodded once, seemingly oddly pleased with the answer."
    snape can be so cute sometimes. though is he in so much denial of what dumbledore said about the two and he only beleives in the 2 dimensional in front of his eyes? esp sine he thinks he can lord it over AD and say that albus was wrong about who draco was with?
    oh and of course the bit with:"his heart took another unplanned leap up into his throat, so that he had to stare very hard at the desk to prevent anyone else seeing the foolish smile which spread across his features." was adorable too.
    though they werent the slytherins to reign supreme in the cute contest. vince and greg beat them both by far. that whole scene between the three of them.
    from the way it started "Greg nodded and after casting a quick glance around to check that they were alone he lowered his voice to a whisper as Vincent had done so recently and confided to Draco.
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  • From ANON - genrou on December 02, 2004
    (33) i guess since aff is up and runnning i would at least leave a few bits from the previous chaps.
    i was dying when i had read draco overhearing pansy coming on to snape. esp with what snape had said and draco's reaction to it and his knowing what snape's was as well.
    man that was great.
    and nice that pansy has still placed granger on the bottom of her suspect list.
    and then of course her telling neveille that she is just as clueless as he.
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  • From ANON - CWolf on December 02, 2004
    I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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