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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

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From ANON - Rei on November 30, 2004
I hope that you daughter is alright and I'm glad that you, personally, did not lose all your 300+ reviews. This story is fabulous and I can hardly wait to see what the outcome will be.
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From ANON - semperputus on November 30, 2004
I love this story I really do and I hope there is lots more to come. Draco in jeans lovely. I also like the developments with Snape and hope Pansy gets what is coming to her. You have kept Blaise on the fence and I love it You have made him so intresting. Thankyou for reloading this to Aff I would hate to lose it now as it just gets better and better but I pray for a happy ending I'm a sucker for fluff. I also say thanks for for making Goyle and Crabbe sweet so many stories have them as mindless baboons and I think they could be so much more. Can't wait for next chapter
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From ANON - min on November 30, 2004
I wanna know what happens next!!! You are da bomb~ No need for cliffies for you, we'll all keep coming back for more even if you stopped writing for months! Not that I want you to do that!!!!
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From ANON - lilil on November 30, 2004
First i hope you kid get well soon, Mine was not good also, Probably the weather change. Okie done for kids life :P:P

I love this Chap. Everything about it was so right, Especially the scene btw draco and hermione! (Not only because of the delectable smut, but overall) the story is just lovely! I really want to know what going to happen in the pre-office! Poor pan!

Thanks for your nice chap, Until next one :):)

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From ANON - eve/roarke on November 30, 2004
I did not realise until today that you had really updated and not just reloading, Hope your daughter is O.k.
Still one of the best Hermione/Draco fanfics, please update soon, last to chapters were great.
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From ANON - Pinkpig on November 29, 2004
I took thh liberty of re-reading this whole fic and I had forgotten how DMAN GOOD it is! (the delicious smut distracted me from the previous brilliant writing) I simply cannot wait one minuet more for hte next chapter. Ok - so maybe 'one' more but that's it! Seriously - update as soon as humanly possible (weather that be a day or a bloody month - just keep updating). I think (my own humble opinion) that this would be absolutly incredibly if you completed the year. You've got alot of long-term plot bits dangling around so I think it would bo incredible. Just putting in my two cents. Besides, teh later you end this fic the better. When you finnish it you had better start another one because I've basicly stopped reading all other fics and focused on this one it's so good. (it's really that good) Oh - and about this cahpter specificly - I loved the bit with greg (or vince was it - they;re like the same person to me) with teh crush on Hermione!!! it was sooo cute and so incredibly clever. Plus Draco's jelouse tantrums make me love him so much. And everyone's thought's taht he hates hermionie whilst he loves her (so much it hurts me the reader for christs sake - ilvoe him!!!!!) makes me laugh and laugh. HTis is awsome. I can't explain how terribly good it is. ust write some more, please!!!!
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From Loreley on November 29, 2004
For CH15
Well, whew, that was certainly steamty. This was one hell of a busy chapter! I would like to say congratulations on being sneaky: I was totally fooled and was convinced it would be Hermione and Draco getting it on, but I'm actually glad it wasn't. Malfoy's change in mindset is becoming more obvious, he's madly in love with her if he can even consider being friends with Ron, and he even managed to be polite to Harry. Speaking of Harry, I thought it was cute how he was trying to chase the Snitchers away now that he knows they bother Ginny. I suppose it was inevitable Hermione would run into Draco in uniform (drool) I think most women love a man in uniform, as cliche as it sounds it's so true! Draco was slightly stalkerish following her into the stands, he almost got caught by Harry. And back to Harry again, that sex scene was...wow. On a pair of airborne brooms, how fun would that be? I'm not surprised Draco finally gave Hermione a real kiss after witnessing something like that with her, I wished she wouldn't have run away without torturing him a bit first, but there's something to be said for anticipation.
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From Loreley on November 29, 2004
For CH14
Well surprised, I had figured out Ron wasn't a virgin, but I thought he'd been with Luna. Huh. I'm not surprised Hermione figured out the dance with Draco was real, she is the birghtest witch of her age. And as for Snitchers, I'm sure she'd love to be Draco's. I wonder when things are finally going to get out of hand with Ron, not that I think he'll try to force her, but I think she'll feel too guilty being with him while lusting after Draco. You are building Malfoy into a well rounded, good man who is not so perfect he doesn't have a few flaws. Great work.
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From Loreley on November 29, 2004
For CH13
Well, Hermione's been doing an excellent job of resisting Malfoy up to now, considering he's dressed as Han Solo who was every girl I've ever known's first crush (yes, me too!). I would also like to say that if Ron had a clue, he'd have figured out something was wrong between him and hermione by now since she's almost always avoiding intimacy with him. But Holy Hermione, I can't believe she actually asked Ron if he was a virgin, and he certainly seemed in no hurry to answer her. And Malfoy showed balls by taunting Ron on the matter, having overheard it. And then there's clever old Dumbledore, who I think Malfoy is only just starting to realize is more clever then most members of his Slytherin house. I wonder if the two love birds will figure out they really did dance together...
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From Loreley on November 29, 2004
For CH12
Well, first I'd like to say your descriptions of the decorations and the feast itself are excellent. I would also like to say Ha Ha to Hermione, who ended up with the doughnut hair which is the only part of the Princess' look that I never envied. Throwing them together in a dance so they could get all hot and bothered and then sending them off to other partners was of course a deliberate torture for the readers, but I certainly love it. Drawing things out makes them so much more fun!.
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From Loreley on November 29, 2004
For CH11
Well, I think this chapter perfectly illustrates why Ron and Hermione wouldn't work out together. Even though he's sweet, he's also clueless and Hermione needs a man who can confuse, challenge and even, dare I say, get the best of her every once in a while. In other words, not Ron. I wonder if he has a thing for Luna? He certainly thought of her fast enough when Hermione mentioned he needed to find a date.
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From ANON - fiesty30 on November 29, 2004
sorry about the earlier review or shall I say lack there of....I hit enter instead of tab but anyway...I love this story and I wanted to write to you to see if you would like to enter this into a d/hr contest that someone I know is sponsoring...if you would you can either check out her website at http://www.geocities.com/dracolov/DracoHermione.html or email me and I can give you the details...I think that your story would be perfect for it. Happy writing and I hope to see more soon....my name is Charlotte by the way if you email me.
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From ANON - bansidh on November 29, 2004
Wow! So much to say. It'll come out as a babble, I just know. Well, obviously you're a Red Dwarf fan..so you've excellent taste. This story has been pimped all over so I finally decided to try it out. Hooked me with the first chapter. Burned half my Sunday reading all the way up to chapter 34 (as far as you've posted to date) and I need to get to bed because of work tomorrow, but all I can think of is "what's going to happen at the Prefect's meeting?" and "What's Snape gonna do to Pansy?" and "infertility treatment, hunh?" and the like. I hate reviewers who threaten authors to get them to update, but I'm afraid that I'm going to have to drag you backwards through a holly bush if you don't post another chapter soon...festive threat, right? Truly though, this is fantastic; your Ginny is absolutely the greatest, you've managed to avoid the "Ron is a stupid, evil git" pitfall that's soooo easy to fall into with HG/DM (even though he's nice, he's not right for Hermione is much more believeable) and your Draco is so damned awesome that he defies further description (even though he does have his flaws--I mean, he loves her, but he is still Draco Malfoy). Yep, rambling on....well, thanks sooo much for writing and I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - CWolf on November 28, 2004
Agian great job on this chapter. I like that now you have established that D and H are together, now they have to focus on maintaining the relationship. Amazing development.
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