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Reviews for The Given Choices

By : JesstinaMalfoy
  • From ANON - Ashley on May 16, 2005
    OMG i love this story i cant wait for more.....the fact that mrs malfoy wants draco to be on the light side makes this the most amazing story i have read please write more soon....i think ill die if u dont lol!!!
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  • From ANON - KittyWolf on May 14, 2005
    This is a pretty cool story. Keep it up. :D
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  • From ANON - Avanell on May 13, 2005
    Awesome! I only got to skim, as I'm getting ready to perform in a ballet tonight...but what I could tell I loved it! Mrs. Malfoy rocks! In a twisted way, of course! Love how both her and her cousin talked about choices and such. Now, just get to some more lemons, please...along with the plot. after all, this IS the adult fanfiction site :)

    This is truly one of my favorite stories!
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  • From ANON - Kenzie_trinity on April 26, 2005
    So good. Too good. More, must have more. Soon!!!!
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  • From on April 22, 2005
    can't wait to read more, update soon.
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  • From ANON - JMarie on April 20, 2005
    Loved it!!! There's not enough stories out with romances that take time to develop.
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  • From ANON - trixrstrange on April 19, 2005
    One can never have TOO much fluff in a story. Quote me on that damnit. Fluff is always good. Builds plot and character along with the emotional attatchments we all love to see. And Shakespeare quoted through there.... brilliant. Can't wait to read more chapters!

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 18, 2005
    Very good use of the Master in this chapter. I was at Oxford several years ago for a summer seminar, and there was this one guy who went on and on about how Shakespeare couldn't have written all the plays, yadda, yadda, yadda. Finally, the prof (who was in his late seventies and very distinguished) had enough, and just said, "He wrote the fucking plays." Classic.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on April 17, 2005
    PS: I'm a professor I don't pay attention to any grammer errors...I love this story too much. And yes, they do bug me in others. Your writing weaves and carries through enough for me. I'm sure I've seen a few errors, but dismiss them. Don't let anonymous slow you down!

    Also, is the second aunt more like a first cousin once removed? In other words, draco's mother's first cousin would be his first cousin once removed. their children would be his second cousins. is that how you mean it? Er, is that how the magic world defines it in your story (there...that was a nicer statement :)
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  • From ANON - Avanell on April 17, 2005
    Goodness, I have been enjoying all the wonderful updates...this is definitely one of my fav's. Loved Bellatrix explaining to her daughter (just perfectly what I had hoped...she discovered who her daughter was and didn't know before) to Draco's sending of the flowers. The interlude in the tub was a nice touch...they didn't go overboard and still hinted at each other. can't wait for what your muse guides you to write next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2005
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on April 14, 2005
    If you don't write more, I shall come to your dwelling and hang you by your toes. there are to few good Hermoine Draco fics out there....and yours is tops. update soon, pretty please.
    Much love,
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on March 31, 2005
    I like the story very much. At the time I am reading it, you have over 4,000 hits. Not too shabby.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2005
    Wow, that was really excellent. Getting them all the way home without being caught, only to drop the Map on us. Congrats.
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  • From ANON - Lady Raine on March 29, 2005
    I think this story has gone wonderfully so far, I am patiently (err, well as patient as someone such as myself can be) waiting for your updates. I am stuck, I need to read what happens! I can pretend and fomulate what might happen, but I still would love to read that last sentence of this wonderful fanfiction you have put together. I do hope you keep writing, seeing as you are very good at it. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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