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By : JesstinaMalfoy
  • From ANON - Avanell on March 17, 2005
    Awesome as usual...just keep it up! I can't wait for the rest of this meeting to play out...and I'm glad you got to Hermione asking that question...I've been waiting for the answer? now...where is Draco while this is happening? Does he realize Herm and Blaise are gone? Please let us know soon!
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  • From ANON - chris on March 08, 2005
    nice, but u need to be careful of your grammar, ok? i know it's not my place to say anything critical, but it seems kinda fuzzy in some places, remember strength in your thoughts are convayed to your work. although i have to say, this is a really cool fic, i hope u keep it up.
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  • From ANON - scelestasaga on February 20, 2005
    Alright, you guilted me into it ^-^. I love the story, especially since i've always like the Draco/Hermes pairing. It's great that you move them together slowly. Sometimes when other authors do it, it feels forced, as if a pupetteer were saying, "This is how it's going to happen, so do just do it.". I also love how Harry isn't a complete prat following the book 5 model as most people make him when it's D/H. Please keep writing, for there will always be those who will read.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on February 19, 2005
    I LOVE this story...I just really hope Draco tells Hermione his feelings...and somehow tells her what is going on. And when are mother and daughter going to meet? Ooh! Love Blaise here...too bad he likes Ginny...or is that changing? What's up? Can't wait for the new chapters!!!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on February 19, 2005
    I LOVE this story...I just really hope Draco tells Hermione his feelings...and somehow tells her what is going on. And when are mother and daughter going to meet? Ooh! Love Blaise here...too bad he likes Ginny...or is that changing? What's up? Can't wait for the new chapters!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2005
    i want hermione to meet her mother. i want her and lupin to have a father daughter talk. most of all i want draco to realise that he actually cares for her. i want him to prove to hermione that he cares for her and that in some weird way they are "meant for one another". however i am not the author. you are. and i tell you know that i am unfortunately addicted to this fic. i about lost it when blaise stood up for hermione. and it broke my heart when she was in the girls bathroom, with the heart on the mirror. i think in this matter all i can say is .... For the love of god and everything that is holy, update the story this minute!!!!!!! thank you for allowing me to ramble.
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  • From ANON - jen on February 16, 2005
    i really enjoy this story. have waited forever for the update. cant wait to find out what happens next please update soon
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on February 15, 2005
    I really like your story! I hope you are going to finish it and that was not the ending! The only thing I don't like about adultfanfic is that there is no date as to when the stories are last updated. Do you know what I mean?! I only have one thing to criticize about your story... you need a beta, someone to read and correct mistakes in spelling and grammar other than that, it's wonderful!! Please update, as I will be coming back to check on it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2005
    must have update must have update now please
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2005
    AAAAAHHHHHHHH, you have to update soon this story is amazing!!!! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - Meep on January 22, 2005
    This is a really good story! I hope you update soon, and when you do, can you please email me? I really like this and would like to be able to see it going along. Thanks.

    Meep

    evilhamster213@earthlink.net
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 12, 2005
    I believe that Hermione's reaction to Draco was pretty natural, even though you weren't planning on it. I am excited to see more of this lovely story.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 12, 2005
    Loved this chapter! Of course, still waiting for the big meeting...you know, mum and daughter. but enjoyed the fantastic date and kiss...hope they do so again soon! don't torture us too much :)
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  • From ANON - Tayler on January 06, 2005
    Hey ur story is going great so far, when do u think u will get another chap out? later
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 02, 2005
    Well ladies, I'm ready for another chapter or two whenever you are! Great bit of work so far, and I can't wait to see whether draco actually gets a some morals or hermione loses all of hers. PLEASE Update Soon!
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