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Reviews for Shadows of the Past

By : VCLM
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - gizmama on January 04, 2005
    I am really enjoying this story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on December 07, 2004
    You've done a nice job of setting up your characters. Hermione, Ron, Harry, et al seem quite in character. Snape is equally well wrought, and is burdened by his position and his natural, snarky tendencies are well expressed. Hermione seems so completely focused on her schoolwork, however, that it's difficult that she might see beyond her own cares, and in this sense she seems exactly like a teenaged girl. Far too young to appeal to an adult wizard. Your ability to 'mature' her will be interesting, and something you'll need to do in order to bring your pairing together in a plausible fashion. Although I do like the Trio's interaction, it reads quite believably. As to the plot itself, having Dumbledore father a child from a May-December romance that he knows nothing about is quite clever. That Voldemort seeks to subvert her is a good idea. However, why would Maria have left no way for Albus to find her -- that smacks of a young woman who didn't return Albus' feelings of a soul-mate... and Claire seems incredibly gullible, too naive to her birth, especially when her mother was aware of what Albus was, and the child is a bit too eager to side with the Dark Lord, especially with inadequate information. All in all, it's a worthwhile endeavor, and you've got a lot of answers to come up with. I'll look forward to seeing how you progress with this story. There's so much potential here.
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  • From ANON - crissy on December 04, 2004
    claire sounds like an idiot. why would anyone trust a man who had her locked in a filthy, rat infested cell? why would she think he is good when he treats his followers terribly? why would she trust him when one of his followers assumed he could ask if he could play with her? shouldn't she have been getting bad vibes from him?
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