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Reviews for Pasicor Lex

By : solisflos
  • From Persy on August 30, 2021

    What a great story. Loved how it ended...


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  • From GuiltyPleasure on August 07, 2008
    I liked this story. I think your writing was pretty good and I like how you went with the Marriage Law.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - the infamous JMarie on September 01, 2005
    I LOVE IT!!!!! Are you going to write more?

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  • From ANON - catpower on March 22, 2005
    It was a very nice story - more charming than sexy, for me. Severus got a bit soppy but he was attractive and Hermione was herself. I really enjoyed the transformation of the bathroom - imagine doing that!
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  • From ANON - Drow on February 22, 2005
    More like 1400 something hits..... I think that u have got something good going, but it needs more..... i was wondering if u could eventually put in a part about what happens at Severus' meetings with the dark lord? I think that this story has some possibilities, it has yet to be molded into what it can truly be, but i think u may have some idea for it- email me if u need help, i l pull ideals out of my head... ;)
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on February 16, 2005
    I really like your story, it was well written and a wonderful concept. I hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - Moyra on December 20, 2004
    For a short Marriage-Law-fiction that was very well done. I liked it that Hermione was in charge, and not Severus, as in most of the other stories. Cheers, M.
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  • From ANON - Carol on December 11, 2004
    I like the idea of writing a one-shot MLC fic. I haven't seen many such stories. I am not sure how I felt about Snape's character, but I thought you generally wrote this well. I hope you keep writing and posting more stories.
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  • From ANON - CMW on December 08, 2004
    Nicely done. Short, sweet and to the ponit. I like Severus's prickliness and Hermione's determination. Perhaps you don't need to add the part numbers, just connect them with words "awhile later... three hours later" etc. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on December 07, 2004
    This was a good one-shot! I liked how you tried to capture both of their view points. I'm very greatful for the hopeful ending!
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  • From ANON - squibby on December 07, 2004
    Wonderful! One of the best Marriage Law Challenge fics I've read.
    Thank you for making Hermione an adult and for showing their burgeoning relationship in such a delightful way.
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  • From ANON - sooz0305 on December 06, 2004
    That was a nice take on the marriage law challange. A bit different. It is always nice to see a confident Hermione and having her a bit older and more mature made for a good story. Severus has his snarky bits intact, but you tempered that side of him nicely by throwing in his insecurites. Well done and well rounded...especially for a one-shot. Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - anni on December 06, 2004
    i think that you have great talent. but this particular story could be bettar. and if you really wanted to you could probibaly get somthing published.
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