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Reviews for Laying the Blame

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  • From on January 01, 2005
    i'm confused, did i miss something in the first chapter? how did harry come into the picture ?
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 01, 2005
    Dear God! Your stories are incredible!!! I love all of them! Anyway, again, please keep up the amazing work!!
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  • From ANON - Josh Cohen on December 31, 2004
    The twist at the end of the second chapter is excellent, although upon further reflection, I suppose I shouldn't have been too terribly surprised.

    The characterizations of Lucius and Hermione are quite good. I would like, in further chapters, to know just how the two of them ended up together beyond "he needed a wife and she was ready to get married". There's got to be more to it than that.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 12, 2004
    Interesting so far--intriguing approach to an often-neglected pairing! Carry on! :)
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  • From ANON - mary on December 08, 2004
    This is good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Inell on December 08, 2004
    Good start. I love Draco/Hermione and I love Lucius/Hermione so this is a two for one! I'm eager to read more.

    Inell
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on December 08, 2004
    Excellent beginning. I feel just awful for Hermione, but something tells me I won't for long. ;) More soon please.
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  • From on December 08, 2004
    yes, it would definately be lucius's fault, if anyone daydreamed about him doing naughty things to them. if draco was my husband, i would have to do just about everything to get him to do really naughty things, probably shag his father in front of him, so he would definately get some kind of message. tell him to watch and learn. do you plan to make this a longer story ? because i would love to see if hermione acts out her fantasy.
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  • From ANON - xena on December 08, 2004
    I'm all for Hermione with Draco AND Lucius! Let's get it on!!!!
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