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Reviews for Let\'s Put the X In Sex

By : nesscafe
  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 21, 2004
    mariteri,

    Are you sure you read my story? Come on read it again! And this time not for the smut! ;c) Oh what the heck read it again for the smut too! I assure you that Snape is very "proactive" in his search for the mystery woman! Remember all he has to work w/ are a blank picture & a short unsigned letter. In the very first paragraph of the second chapter I explain that "each night" he "would study the blank photograph" & "read the note that came with the picture over and over in hopes of recalling that familiar neat scrawl". I also explain a few paragraphs later that "Already he had tried several spells on both the picture and the letter to help him identify the sender. Nothing seemed to work." Snape is a private man and also a smart and subtle Slytherin. He does everything short of questioning people around him to find out who this woman is. He hasn't done that yet because even though the writing on the letter seems familiar he has already ruled out women he knows well. He's pigeon holed the females around him as being undesirable or just not kinky enough to send him this picture. Instead of interogating those around him, he's trying spells and wracking his brain to remember meeting someone that would hint at this type of personality. The note is also very cyrptic. It doesn't exactly say I like you or I want you or even I've been thinking about you. It says, "Let's Put the X in Sex." that can be taken a lot of different ways and before she fire calls him he's thinking maybe he took the meaning of the letter and picture the wrong way. He was NOT "hanging around waiting for the call"! He was conveniently at home when the call came because I'm the writer and we needed him home when she called. But he was home thinking about what to do next to figure out who she is and then feeling like he made a mistake while getting pissed. Hope this sheds some light on the story for you. ;c)

    Ness,
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  • From ANON - mariteri on December 21, 2004
    Great story so far, but I have a question. Don't you think that Snape would be more proactive in trying to find his mystery woman? The man is smart and if he is as possessive as you are making him out to be here, he wouldn't just be hanging around waiting for the call. But like I said, it's a great story and I do hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Random Breathtest on December 20, 2004
    You go! that is excelent! this is one of the more originals i've come across so far. keep up the good work.
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  • From BrianChattillon on December 19, 2004
    An inspired heavy talking chapter two indeed, I wonder what other sentual exploits Chapter three will reveal
    Waiting impaitentlly
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on December 19, 2004
    Please udpate soon.
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  • From ANON - JuliaSnape on December 17, 2004
    WOOOHOOOO!!!!!!! Really, really hot!! Bravo!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Colleen on December 16, 2004
    Wow!! A KISS fan AND a fanfiction author. Awesome start!
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  • From ANON - Becky on December 15, 2004
    Ooooohhhhh I love this story, it is sooooo Hot!!! Great first two chapters... Hurry with #3... woo hoo!!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on December 15, 2004
    Great work. Please try to update before the 29th.
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  • From ANON - Simone on December 14, 2004
    WOW!!!!! (I think that sums it up nicely) :)
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  • From ANON - On the Rocks on December 14, 2004
    Ohhh... I liked it! Severus's voice is really really sexy.Please post the next chapter soon! I loved it
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  • From ANON - pinky on December 14, 2004
    Well, this was my first time reading sex by floo *g* this was a great part. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Betz on December 14, 2004
    Well since ashwinder iis too slow to post this, I'll R&R here this time. Oh my GOD! That was wickedly hot! I like how you turned phone sex into Floo sex. Excuse the drool on the keyboard. Did I say that was hot? Makes me want to ship the kids off for a week and lock the bedroom door. I'll have to read this fic to my husband, he'll LOVE this. I most certainly do! Yes, write, WRITE! Need more chapters ASAP.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on December 14, 2004
    Awesome! Can't wait to see the reveal of we know who.
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  • From ANON - Shine on December 14, 2004
    And again...COUCH! COUCH! COUCH! HEHEHE, EXCELLENT, really really excellent!.
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