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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From ANON - DH on January 31, 2005
    You bow to me? NO way! I love how you turned that around! This is definitely the best chapter yet, keep up the good work!

    *dies now*

    DH
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  • From ANON - Shi Rurouni of the Aphrodesiac on January 31, 2005
    *blushes darkly* 7 and a half inches?! Well I certainly won't be able to contain a squeal anytime i see him wave his wand about.

    It's excellent, please continue. *blushes even darker* i'm a smut addict, and i don't want help. PLEASE!! I need more Snarry, i'm feeling rather smut deprived. *glomps* anyways, can't wait for more, stupendous writing duckie.
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les on January 30, 2005
    OMG yay. You updated just what I wanted. And then there was some smut. Oooh oh. Update withing then next minute and you can have a fudge cookie that I made.
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  • From ANON - Akitso on January 30, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!!!
    *faints*
    That was good.
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  • From ANON - Anon. on January 30, 2005
    I really like this.... Draco's character really changes, and I like him portrayed in a non-bastard way. =) Great lemon, btw.
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  • From ANON - armpit on January 30, 2005
    gah....gah....o_o
    *fills bathtub with drool* that was so hot.
    This chapter was REALLY good!
    The question if we think this is bad, is out of order:P
    If the next chapter is better, I don't think I'll be able to...uhm...yeah:P won't survive.
    I love this!
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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on January 30, 2005
    Loved it! OMG, how am I supposed to watch a HP movie with Snape whipping his wand out? *Giggles*
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on January 30, 2005
    So far I am loving this story and can't wait for you to update so do it soon k. Awesome.
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  • From ANON - Vash_the_dork on January 29, 2005
    Anybody have a drool bucket?

    More, please? Pretty please? With a chocolate-covered hunk on top?

    I'll beta for you if you want, i can have it back to you in under 24-hours (if multiple chapters)

    My english isn't perfect but is better than most.

    Can we have the snarry sex scene now?
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 28, 2005
    You leave it right there? With Harry going down to wait for Snape in his office, his pants full of cum...

    I gotta tell you, I loved the Draco/Harry scene. Yumm...

    Now post more please. And whoever is complaining about your English skills can go @#%& themselves. Fanfiction is supposed to be fun, not professional. Just like going out to 'shoot some hoops', you don't breakout the basketball handbook.


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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on January 28, 2005
    Hey, great story. I had read the first seven chapters, and just found my bookmark for this, so I was happy to find you had written so much more! Very nice characterization of Draco, he's usually not a fav of mine, but I really like his interactions with Snape and Harry. My advice for the spelling would be just run a spellcheck program, and then read it over again for content. Your story is great, you have some really original ideas. People mention spelling because it pulls you out of the story a bit, and for some people it can be enough of a distraction that they have trouble continuing to read it. And that would be a shame, because the story is a wonderful read, and we can never have enough stories about Harry and Severus together. Looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 28, 2005
    Oh, and since I know people correcting ur spelling grates on UR nerves, I forgot the evil little laugh. mwahaha!!

    AND THE 30 SECONDS IS UP!!! WITH NO UPDATES!!!!! NOT HAPPY!!!!!!! lol

    Yeah, I'm psychopathic. Deal with it. :-P

    Ok, I'll stop bombarding u with reviews (three reviews counts as bombarding!!!!!) now, just PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE update SSSOOOOOONNN!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 28, 2005
    Oh, and it's VOLDEMORT. Not VOLDOMORT. VOLDEMORT. lol. not that ur probably going to be mentioning the name again, it was just grating on my nerves.

    Yes, I am a perfectionist. With spelling. Not, as u can see, with the whole shortcuts thing (u instead of you, etc).

    Blah.

    10 seconds remaining.
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  • From ANON - DH on January 28, 2005
    Pulling out his crumpled timetable Harry spelled a duplicate copy, minus the extra lessons Snape had put in at the beginning of the year. With the new crisp copy in his hand Harry crumpled up the old one and shoved it into his trunk before going about crinkling the new one so that it looked used and worn.

    SO how come it wasn't found in the trunk?
    *asking the plot related question*

    Good fic otherwise, so don't let flamers get you down, you don't read a fic for the spelling you know!

    DH
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 28, 2005
    I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you... but if you don't update SOON with at least TWO chapters, I swear to all that is Holy, I will hunt you down, and TICKLE YOU TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I can't believe I waited this long to read this story, but now I wish I had waited a bit longer, so that YOU COULDN'T TORMENT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When are they going to eventually fuck, anyway? Erm... ok, I didn't just swear. I don't swear. I'm a nice girl. :)

    But I will hurt you. I swear. ok, maybe not, because if you live more than an hour away from me, I'm going to have to find some money. But please update within... oh, I'll be generous... the next thirty seconds... and then I won't hurt you.

    Remember, at least two chapters!!!!!
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