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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Chys on January 28, 2005
    38 was the best chapter yet, damn that was a good one, any more on the way soon please?

    Please?


    Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Aly on January 27, 2005
    Yay!! More chapters! I LOVE this story! I can't wait to see what Snape wants to talk to Harry about. ;) hehehe
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on January 27, 2005
    Whew! That was a doozy!
    re: english students... You know, I'm usually anal retentive about grammar and spelling, but with your story, I gotta say...I'm kinda distracted by the story line. Now, I don't want to insult anyone, but what the hell are they doing paying more attention to the grammar than this fabulous plot? Ignore the schmucks. And update as much as you please, because the smart ones here are going, "More, more, faster, faster..." And maybe something else, but I'm not going to speak for anyone else on that matter. *smirk*
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  • From ANON - Samaria on January 27, 2005
    Definitely needs work on spelling and grammar. Character names and other words are misspelled, wrong words are used throughout (for example, you use "cause" when you mean "because"), and plurals are used as possessives (and vice versa). Just because you're not being paid doesn't mean you shouldn't take the time to write correctly. Other people are taking the time to read it, so it should be as good as you can make it. You owe your readers that much. Reading this is like going for a walk and enjoying the beautiful scenery, but constantly having to dodge large rocks along the way. The rocks - the spelling and grammar errors - are that distracting. They interrupt the flow of the story. I probably won't finish it, because there are so many others that are written well. At best, I may skim this to see what happens, but I'll sit back and truly enjoy the well-written stories. If you want an example, check out A Year Like None Other by Aspeninthesunlight. beautifully written!
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  • From ANON - Ezmerelda on January 26, 2005
    Interesting story, but the errors are distracting. Please learn the difference between plural and possessive! And a beta can help find the spelling errors that Spell Check won't find.
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  • From ANON - Chys on January 26, 2005
    Ooh, it's getting REALLY good!


    Can't wait for more!
    Is it posted elsewhere?


    Chys
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  • From ANON - woof on January 26, 2005
    me me me !!!! I wanna see some dangling bits!!!!! To 'F' with grammar and spelling!!!!!! bits bits bits VEG!!!
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  • From ANON - armpit on January 26, 2005
    HOT.

    *throws hands in air*
    SNAPE-BITS! SNAPE-BITS! SNAPE-BITS! SNAPE-BITS!
    give me my SNAPE-BITS!
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  • From ANON - spazlady2002 on January 26, 2005
    Imust be honest here. I my self have not really seen or noticed any grammer or spelling mistacks. seeing as my grammer, spellin and pucuation suck big time. anyway... you update much faster then most of the other autors I like. good thing that. anyway... I like this story and now I am going to be a bit ansy about waiting for the sex part of the story but I can wait untill you get around to it. keep up the good work and keep updating. I just felt like reviewing your story.
    spaz
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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on January 26, 2005
    Please update soon! I love your story, and who cares about wrong spelling, grammar and suchlike anyway? *Holds up a platter filled with delicious gourmet food for your muse* Enjoy!
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 26, 2005
    Uh...come on :D don't let us hanging there *lol*

    I really enjoy your story and enjoy that you let Snape, Harry and us readers alike build up with tension ;)
    But PLEASE relief us all after such a long time hahaha!!

    Thanks for updating so regularly & your great work.

    Cat
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 26, 2005
    Can I tell you how much I loved chapter 35? YUMM!!! A nice tutorial with Draco showing Harry what to do with his fingers would not be unwelcome... ;) And yes, yes, I am very much interested in Snape's dangly bits. :D Please. please put another chapter up soon.

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  • From ANON - tamargrl on January 26, 2005
    Wheeeeeeeeeeeee! Yay. It makes me so happy when you post a new chappie. (And we're not left dangling in the wind quite so much any more, so I can't call you names.) And do keep writing, because if this is you needing practice, I can't wait to read more. :)
    ps- if you ever need a beta.... you know, for that pesky grammar and all... *waves frantically and jumps up and down* Ooh me, ooh me!
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  • From ANON - myrtle on January 26, 2005
    Not an English teacher? Well, neither am I, dear "Rafriff". Anyway, the plot is still quite above the ordinary.
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 25, 2005
    Wohoo! Great story...puhlease update soon :)
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