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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 14, 2005
    This story keeps improving, I like the way Draco and Harry are getting closer, yet manage to
    stay very reserved with each other.
    Snape is different in this story and he seems to be more open to companionship.

    Wish you had gone more into Draco's sex talk, I think that could have been hilarious.

    Update soon,
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  • From ANON - musama on January 14, 2005
    Hello!

    Your story is really breathtaking and I can't wait to see what happens next. Harry and Snape are so cute together. It's really great the you are updating so often. Keep goin on!
    Musama
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2005
    So gooooooooood. I loved this last chappie. Mmmmmm, Christmas, presents...and it's Jan 13th! Does that mean we'll get more presents in the future? I do so love the first stage of awkward anticipation and realization. wheeee!
    Oh, and the rest of the story is good, too. (It's just that this last chapter was worthy of review.)
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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on January 13, 2005
    I simply love this story! *sighs happily* But could you please speed up the passion between Harry and Snape?
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  • From ANON - Ai on January 13, 2005
    oeh;)
    Still as sweet as ever to update like crazy!
    keep up.
    how much chapters will there be?
    (en btw, whats the sirius thing?)
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on January 13, 2005
    Well I don't know how I missed this story *shrug* at least I got to read 20 chapters in one go!

    I'm really, *really* enjoying the story for a number of reasons. I like that you're taking the time to build up both the storyline and your version of the characters because, with this pairing especially, you really need to have somesort of character growth/development in order for it to be believable.

    Your plot is interesting too - very intriguing premise the 'transition' and how it affects Harry and his link to Voldemort. I liked that you didn't do a major rehash of the past 5 years of Harry's life because frankly even a minor rehash gets annoying after the millionth time one has read them, however, that said I was a bit confused though initially about whether the story took place after OoTP but perhaps that was just me.

    I've not read the review thread so if I'm repeating others forgive me, but I have to say I think you did the right thing pulling back from EvilDraco. He's an annoying, spoiled little prat but I questing whether JKR herself would say he was outright evil. I like the way you've allowed *us* as readers to infiltrate Slytherin with Harry to see that, while not particularly pleasant or *good*, neither are the Slytherins necesarrily evil. So yeah, I'm glad you have your Harry hanging out with Draco and I can believe it because they are just hanging out, not becoming bestest buddies or declaring their undying love for one another (not that that is necesarily a bad thing mind ~_^).

    Finally I like the way you're portraying Severus because you've kept the snarkiness but allowed for some mystery - always a good combo imho. What I wouldn't give for a picture of AR done up as you described Snape for Harry's hearing - yum!

    I'll be interested to see where the next update takes us, which is my polite way of saying 'Update again soon'!

    Marie
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  • From ANON - Moi on January 13, 2005
    Good. Nothing like making Harry work his arse off to get where he's supposed to be. There will be, of course, fringe benefits for all his hard work? Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Papaya on January 12, 2005
    *bearing gifts of chocolate frogs and butterbeer for your muse* Another great update! Harry gets high . . . what fun! I'm almost inclined to think that perhaps something more should have happened at that party, but it's understandable that nothing more did. Are we going to find out exactly what Severus was doing watching Harry at practice? Are we going to get some good clean Snarry fun soon? Can't wait to read your next update! As always, thanks for the great entertainment, and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on January 12, 2005
    Hey, this story is great. Well written, with an interesting premise. I just came across it, so I was able to gorge on all the chapters at once! Really looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - limless goldfish on January 12, 2005
    hmmmmmm XD
    youre an updating maniac you know that? XD
    That's the way uhuhuhuh I like it!
    Here's your review:p now be a good author and write!:P
    I luv this.
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  • From ANON - Papaya on January 12, 2005
    Still a very good read! Looking forward to more. Are Harry and Draco going to actually become friends, or is it going to continue to be more just a cessation of hostilities? Thanks for the great entertainment, and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ditzy on January 12, 2005
    I'm still really enjoying this and am looking forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - lisa23 on January 12, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this. I like the way Draco is trying to work Harry into Slytherin now. Perhaps he wants to convert him? Lure him away from Griffindor? Anyway, chocolate frogs to you!
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  • From ANON - E on January 11, 2005
    Love the story. How long before something happens between Snape and Harry?
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  • From ANON - woof on January 10, 2005
    nononononononono, must kill Fudge!!!!!!!! Poor Harry!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapters!!!
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