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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 10, 2005
    Poor Harry. Can Snape kiss him and make him all better now? :D

    Yeah, I didn't think it would be that easy. Okay. Go ahead and write the story your way. :)

    Great fic. I'm really enjoying it!
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  • From ANON - Nova on January 10, 2005
    I like and I don't like this fic. I disagree with you in somethings, like the veritaserum. Harry doesn't only answer the questions, but he has to tell more? Why? If I ask you 'did you kill this person?' you wouldn't answer that 'no, but I did kill that one'. Other one is the whole slythering deal. Who puts a boy with practically no means to defend in a dorm that is known to be hostile towards him? And the only safety is a teacher that one: hates him (or so he thinks), two: can't really act. So maybe Snape can help him with his magic, but what does it help if he is killed before it?

    But like I said, I also like this fic. The telling is smooth and does not just jump in one place to other. I can't wait to see what happens! And the fic has an actual plot too, nice:) I like the way Snape is and I like the way Potter is and won't you put them do cute things to each other?;) And lynch to Malfoy!
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  • From ANON - Ditzy on January 09, 2005
    The first thing I'm going to say is that I do really like this story and am looking forward to reading the rest of it. However I would like to know at what point do you depart from canon. I think that this is set in Harry's 6th year, but Sirius is still alive. So do you depart from book five about half way though? Also if this is set in the sixth year Fred and George would not be at Hogwarts as they leave in book five as seventh years. I hope that this doesn't sound too critical as I really do love this story and you are a very good writer.
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  • From ANON - woof on January 06, 2005
    OMG, the tension is so thick it could be cut with a knife!!!!!!! I do LOVE the tension!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2005
    I like this story! It's changed in tone as the chapters went on, but it's a new spin on Harry/Snape... :) Hope you update tonight.
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  • From ANON - E-M on January 06, 2005
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  • From ANON - Ai on January 06, 2005
    *strokes muse*
    please?:P

    btw; you did better on the beta:D I like this story so keep up. Or else no more strokes for the muse!
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  • From ANON - Papaya on January 06, 2005
    *strokes Riff Raff's muse* I am really enjoying this story! Thank you very much for the wonderful entertainment! I like the idea of the "transition" and think it's definitely one of the more original ideas I've read. So is Harry going to blow something else up before he gets a handle on it, and is that going to be what triggers the next step in Harry and Severus' relationship? Anyway, thanks again for the great story, and please update soon! *strokes Riff Raff's muse again*
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  • From ANON - manx on January 05, 2005
    This story is, thankfully!, a little different from so many others. More please!! I do really like this one.
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  • From ANON - limpless_goldfish on January 05, 2005
    pls continue!:D
    I like this, I've been checking everyday if you've been updating (and suddnly there were 2 new chapters *-*)
    Continue or I'll kill you, I'm ery skilled with my hands ~.^
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  • From ANON - woof on January 05, 2005
    You updated!!!!!!!!!! YIPPEEEEEEEEE!!!!! Thank you very much!!!!! I do like this story.
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  • From ANON - melody on January 05, 2005
    just thought i'd let you know, i'm really enjoying your story, and i hope you continue it. very interesting premise. I have seen a few spelling errors (mostly place names), but you could easily clear those up by haveing a decent beta look it over for you before you post.
    lookign forward to your next update. =D
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  • From ANON - alan_snape-lover on January 05, 2005
    whoohoo! go on! i love the story!
    update soooooooon, kay?

    xxx
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 05, 2005
    I am very much enjoying your story and looking forward to the slashy goodness! Your plot is a novel idea that haven't seen before so it will be good to see where this leads. Your Harry is a little bit petulant, but I assume this is the 'transition' affecting him.
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  • From ANON - felmyst on January 05, 2005
    Great so far! Keep It up. I really like the plot.
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