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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From ANON - xikum on February 12, 2006
    I just discovered this story, and am immensely enjoying it - Harry is such a hormonal teen!! And Snape is being so much a more mature, normal, though in-character snarky, powerful wizard. But, as a person who is nearly blind as a bat without my glasses, and knowing hom much a new prescription costs, and the difference in vision etween old & new glasses - I cannot help but feel for Harry being stuck with his old glasses!! Did Snape get Harry's new glasses back to him, and it's just a detail you haven't mentioned yet??
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on January 19, 2006
    Okay, first I'd like to tell you that I've read all of your stories and you are one of my favorite authors. I just had a couple things that kind of bothered me. Just things that a BETA would catch. Words that I caught that were misspelled:
    Lucius = Lucious
    afraid = affraid
    hoped = hopped
    There were a couple others but I can't remember them. But I loved the story, I really did!
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  • From ANON - dfntgrl on January 08, 2006
    love it, just thought I would let you know... wished it would have gone further, maybe a sequal, with them being married or bonded or something and whatever
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  • From ANON - Miss Holeva on January 01, 2006
    So I've just started reading this and already I'm interested. You seem to be very good at capturing beginnings. =). By the way, I like your screen name....might it be from Rocky Horror Picture Show?

    ~Riisa Holeva
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  • From ANON - QueenRissa on December 24, 2005
    Another great job! Your fics are imaginative and addicting to read. I just knew that Draco wouldn't be such an ass when given the chance. I've also laughed so hard and so much (Snape's wand, hehehehe) that my neighbors are probably wondering what the hell I've been doing.

    I must admit that when I got to the authors notes at the end of Chapter 53 and you stated that there would not be a fluffy ending, I had a sinking feeling along the lines of *someone dies* or *no more Snarry*.
    Also, and please don't take this the wrong way or anything, I truly enjoy your stories, and you did address this in an authors note section, but your english, and giving Harry blue eyes instead of green, leave a bit to be desired. I have never beta'd a story before, but I will be willing to check over any Harry Potter stories you write in the future. I am very meticulous.
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  • From ANON - vbollman(nsi) on November 11, 2005
    Okay. I've reread it. and i STILL LOVE IT. the relationship between harry and snape is wonderful. I've cried, laughed and almost screamed in frustration with this one. Thank you so much for writing such a woderful story.

    Luvs ya.
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  • From ANON - vbollman(nsi) on November 11, 2005
    I LOVED IT. that said, i'm gonna stop reviewing and go back and read it again.


    Later
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  • From ANON - Wren on November 05, 2005
    I am sorry that I did not review chapter by chapter...I like doing one longer comment. You know Quality over Quanity. Anyways, I have to say that this is the best Harry Snape story that I have ever read. The smut was not crude or cliche, and their were two parts that I liked a lot. One was how Draco blew the smoke into Harrys mouth. The just seemed incredibly erotic to me. I love how you wrote Draco in this....and the part with the red hair and him wearing a Jumper? Brilliant!

    The other part that I really liked was the thought of Harry Running about in a towel. That made me giggle way too much and for that I thank you. I also got all teary eyed at the end so yeah for you! I cant wait to see what else you have written and I promise to do so when I get back from work tonight....the only fault of this story was it was long. Far from boring but I get lazy...I need a nap. BYE!
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  • From ANON - barbarataku on October 25, 2005
    No email reply needed. I appreciate the time and energy you have spent on this HP story. We hope you do not desert us and go back to LOTR to create. The story was interesting and had several new wizard facts, for your story only, that I found interesting. I liked the way you handled the characters. Draco is just soooo funny. The theme of lies half lies, or unspoken words seem to play a big part in this story although it seems like what is not said is more dangerous. Thanks for sharing and as far as I am concerned deserves a 5 star rating. This was one of those stories that as soon as you find it you want to read all that is available before reviewing..
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  • From ANON - Jeff on October 12, 2005
    ok this is the frist harry and snape fic i ever read and i love it and im a dir hard harry and draco fan i just got board there cuase i read em all twice and i had to move on lol back to the review you wright really good stories and i liked all the ones ive read so far and don't worry no one has perfect grammer

    Jeff
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  • From ANON - Menecarkawan on October 06, 2005
    Harry living with the Slytherins... this should be interesting. I think Dumbledore may have finally lost his mind.

    On a side note: It's spelled Voldemort, with an 'e'. I'm sure some else has probably already mentioned it, but, there you go... *shrugs*
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  • From ANON - menecarkawan on October 06, 2005
    I like your story overall so far, but I have a few questions/comments. First off, I'm curious to know how Sirius came back after the Veil incident, or is this completely AU and he never fell in at all? Also, your timeline is a bit off, because they don't return to school until a month after Harry's birthday. Aside from that, I'm enjoying it. On to the next.
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  • From ANON - Genee on August 22, 2005
    I loved it. The story had a great plot both Snape and Harry went through trials and hardship and joy and happiness. So your story was beautiful written in my opinion. You should be proud of it.
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  • From ANON - tragicsleep on July 21, 2005
    i adore this story! your talent never stops to amaze me. i'm not sure which story i like best: this one or the other severus/harry one i've read by you. either way,they are both favourites of mine. thank you for giving us the pleasure of such wonderful fiction. take care.

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  • From ANON - sethian on June 13, 2005
    I really hope Harry's gonna get his revenge for this one, Malfoy is really an ass.
    Your story is fantastic. ^.^

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