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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Lizzie on June 03, 2005
    Again, loved it ^.^ It took me a bit to read all of this one, but that's because real life has decided to dump unimaginable amounts of crud onto me at one time *grumbles*

    I think you should write another HP fic. You're really great at it. But, then again, I understand why you might now want to-Snarry is a hard ship to write (or so I am told-I don't have the guts to attack it yet o.O)

    But again, great story and plot and, of course, smut ^.^

    xoxox,
    Liz
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  • From ANON - Shriannan on June 02, 2005
    Well I just finished this lovely piece of work and can only say I haven't been this pleased by a bit of HP fanfiction in a long, long while. I've very glad you didn't stick to what you knew. ^-^

    Ta!
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  • From ANON - broken angel on May 28, 2005
    very interesting story so far
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  • From ANON - the butcherbakercandlestickmaker on May 18, 2005
    haha... nice ending...
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  • From ANON - gamma on May 08, 2005
    Pretty good, pretty good. One of these days, I highly recommend you find someone to proofread it for you. The grammatical and spelling errors are distracting and pull one from the story... For example: "..where plump untrained mussels flexed sporadically on Harry
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  • From ANON - miststalker on April 27, 2005
    what!? its over :( NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Well that should give you my opinion. Now I'm off to read the other one I saw lalalalalala. NEVER stop writing.
    Mist
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  • From ANON - Morgan Le Fay on April 27, 2005
    Absolutely bloody incredible!!!!!! A case of butterbeer, chocolate frogs and caldron cakes to your muse!!!! Please write more HP fanfic, especially the Snarry kind!!!

    Much gratitude!!!
    Morgan
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  • From LisaSeuferer on April 20, 2005
    I'm a huge Harry Potter fan, and will read Snape in ANY pairing with relish. I enjoy your writing style, but I wish you had kept a little more to canon events of OotP, since your story is clearly set after OotP. Sirius Black died in OotP, and frankly for many of us 'TRUE' Snape fans, he's a wanker whom we are glad to see dead and gone. If you wanted him to be back in this story, it might have made things flow a bit more smoothly if you somehow addressed how/why he is still alive, rather than just that he is. You also gloss over the rift between Percy and his family as though everyone is all hunky-dory now, and as this is Harry's 6th year, Fred and George ought not to be in school--last year was their 7th year, and they dropped out.

    Anyway, sorry to be picky about the 'canon' details. I really like the interaction between Snape and Harry so far (I'm only on chapter 7) and I think your portrayals of the personalities of the characters are bang-on. I like the idea of the transition, and I always love my Snarky Snape to be the reluctant hero/protector of Harry. The canon details aren't that big of a deal, but it does make for a little bit of a rough transition when the other parts of your story are following canon so well.

    Enjoying it very much.
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  • From ANON - fairypoet on April 18, 2005
    *BOWS DOWN BEFORE YOU*

    YOu are fucking amazing!!!!!!!! I LOVE :YOU!!! AHHHHH!

    YOu are soo....wow....your up there with God. Damn good writer.

    Story was fantastic!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Joey on April 17, 2005
    OMG LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT can't say it enough times
    read it all in one day, I can see that shortstorywriting class coming in handy in the near future, but it was totally worth it
    THANK YOU
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  • From ANON - Luna Riddle on April 02, 2005
    oh man that is one awesome story!!! romantic and yet keeping perfectly to the characters! *big happy sigh*
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  • From ANON - Lightningbook on March 28, 2005
    I please tell me that's not the only HP story you plan to write....?!? as for your comments on English and grammar I wouldn't worry about it the story was enough to keep my attention off of it. I loved the story !



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  • From ANON - TrekkieGrrrl on March 23, 2005
    Well, I'm a sucker for a good Snarry with a happy ending and this was just it :o)

    In short, I loved the story. I've spent the last three days on and off reading the whole lot and it was definately worth it!

    Some loose ends and stuff but all in all: YUM!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on March 08, 2005
    I loved it! So wonderful. All the emotionsl ups and downs. Perfect.
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  • From ANON - Katie K on March 08, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *cries* I love this story soo much!!! You are such a good writer! I adore you!!!!!!!!!!
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