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Reviews for Love, Lies & Loneliness

By : harriet
  • From Heart_of_Castiel on October 10, 2018

    Just to let you know I completely adored this.


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  • From Severus1snape on November 16, 2015
    Aaaah, so sweet and lovely
    and a lot of fun and drama

    one thing though, snape did say he loved Harry prior to this last chapters, but who cares, is an awsome story

    thank you
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  • From Annecia89 on January 20, 2015
    I absolutely loved it!!
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  • From Arithmancer on February 19, 2013
    I will never get the image of Snapes wand out of my head. OMG!
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  • From ANON - Madxhatter on November 18, 2011
    What I love about your stories, is that the relationships are far from perfect. You some how capture the awkward, cringe worthy moments that make love so exciting and silly. There were points where I had to stop reading, squirming in my seat because of what Harry was saying or doing- and I think its this element along with the amazingly well written characters of your which make your stories so addictive and captivating

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  • From ANON - anonimous on February 10, 2011
    Awesome read. Great plot. The only flow I found is in chapters where Snape and Harry are being watched by ministry, you kept writing 'minister' instead of 'ministry's official'.
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  • From jujukitty on February 08, 2011
    this was really good, lots of suspense and emotion and can't forget steamy lol. great job on it. and even for being your first harry potter fic, you kept the characters pretty true to themselves.
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  • From ANON - x on September 27, 2010
    My friends and I have all been reading this story, and ...ta da!... I finished first. Good fic. Loved your Snape. Mixed reactions about Draco. Harry was appropriately juvenile, but seemed far too young for any kind of relationship. Not happy with the slapping (Harry, Snape) or the violence (Sirius), but over all the fic moved along at a fast pace, and kept me interested. Looking back, I'm not quite sure how you wrote so many words about nothing in particular (not major plot innovations) and still kept in interesting, but it was definitely entertaining. It would have been just as effective, if no moreso, without the detailed sex scenes. I doubt if any fanfic readers still need the old fashioned primer: One finger, two finger, three finger, penetration, reach around, climax.
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  • From ANON - Mitch on September 27, 2010
    If you'd said you were Asian, everyone would have understood the broken English and the perfectly ordinary European/American size penis being called huge.
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  • From ANON - Annie on September 27, 2010
    Ch. 33 should be half the length. Other than that, the only things that slow down the story are the misuse of HP vocabulary words and the horrible spelling mistakes. The author says mistakes lend her writing, "character," but mostly they stop the flow of the story, make me lose my train of thought, make me think of English classes instead of the plot and characters. A beta could make this fic one of the all-time greats.
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  • From ANON - x on September 27, 2010
    Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - silly on September 27, 2010
    An old mansion probably has real plaster, not plasterboard.
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  • From ANON - Silly on September 27, 2010
    ch 23 The boys should wash their hands before eating.
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  • From ANON - x on September 26, 2010
    "...until such time as your transition is complete the arrangement will remain in place.
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  • From ANON - Dreamjanus on June 24, 2010
    7 1/2 is big??? not really, unless that is the width...6 is average 9-13 is big.
    Good story otherwise
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