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By : sabreenthequeen
  • From on April 05, 2005
    I think everyone knows that in this story Draco and Hermione belong together. You never did mention what went on at the Slytherin party, did Draco do anything that might have hurt Hermione if she would have walked in to surprise him ? please update soon, i can't wait til these two get back together.
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  • From ANON - Divide on April 04, 2005
    hmm, you're on ff.net too...cool.

    Good job, I love the plot.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 03, 2005
    I would just like to say that I resent all this business about blonds. Some of us are NATURAL blonds. We are not ditzy, we are just from Scandinavia. And yes, we do have a lot of fun. BTW, I like your story a lot.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on April 02, 2005
    Can't wait to read more!! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - HatefuL to YoU on March 31, 2005
    ~*~OMG this is really good omg i swear to god this is something i would read! It just got my attention.....ur really good XXXPPP keep up the good work and I love Draco and Hermy's relationship!!! Plz do tell us how it enDz cuz im dieinG to finD out!!!
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  • From ANON - my name? I don\'t really know myself what it is on March 30, 2005
    Let's see now. You've successfully turned Hermione into an immature, air-headed, little twit. And that's just in the first few lines. You have absolutely no respect for the personalities of these characters and no mind for detail. You can't even set up a good enough opening to this little abomination. In short, I think you're a horribly below-average writer who's very likely still in the 9th grade and has no business writing anything remotely sexual (unless you've already put out to the first guy that said you're cute). Graduate from high school with at least a 3.7 GPA and high marks in English before you consider writing to spare us (at least those of us that have any real sense, because I'm guessing that there were a whole bunch of people that told you what a good/excellent/awesome fic this is etc. But guess what? They're probably just a bunch of sexually frustrated teenagers that couldn't pull a good story out of their asses even if they tried) the pain of this abhorrant piece of shit that you proudly call your fic. I've grown severely tired of coming across Badfic! that I'm at my breaking point.

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  • From ANON - Apollonia on March 25, 2005
    Poor Hermione! She is really upset about the whole ordeal. Will she and Draco make-up and have awesome make-up sex? Please say, "YES!" *gives sad puppy dog eyes* Please update soon! :)
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  • From on March 18, 2005
    Please don't let it be over.
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  • From ANON - candice on March 17, 2005
    so sad :0(
    i want a happy ending !!!!!!!!1
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Soranji on March 17, 2005
    yay. I've been reading this for a while. I really like this story.
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  • From on March 14, 2005
    * Yelling at the people in the GCR * how could they let that happen ? I hope Draco and Hermione patch things up.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on March 13, 2005
    Okay, I figured something like this would happen, but I hope Draco doesn't go off and do something stupid like say, "Well, I never loved you anyway. You're just a mudblood bitch that was a good lay. That's all!" and leave her. I know that angst was to come, but you've got to put some fluff because too much angst can be draining. Please continue! :)
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  • From ANON - betty on February 22, 2005
    An author has two voices; the one they use in their own lives and the other is reserved for their stories. Everyone is different, so should the characters in a story. A writer needs to develop different voices and actions and motives for each central character. I think this is something you should work on because after reading four chapters, everyone seems...the same. Suggestions on how to develop this trait: listen carefully to the dialogue when watching tv, movies - learn to start watching body language - and most obvious, read as much of everything as you can.

    Good progress - I would not have reviewed if I thought otherwise.
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  • From ANON - slytherinswn on February 21, 2005
    Queeny what can I say I just like to leave reviews,lol

    Actually this is why I stopped by.

    It has some to m attention that some of your reviewers are being incredibly bogus and well all I have to say is this:

    GIVE THIS STORY A CHANCE. YOU HAVE NO IDEA OF THE EXCITEMENT THAT IS COMING. AND FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO DO ENJOY IT. GOOD KEEP READING IT ONLY GETS BETTER!!!!!!!

    ROCK ON QUEENY!1!!!

    ~SLY~
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  • From on February 15, 2005
    Nice one for a 12? or 90 year old guy. I am sorry but i hate writing freaking long reviews they tend to boring. I more thing, how old are u. BUT DONT EMAIL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Just write it in your next chapter

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