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Reviews for Losing The Game

By : merrykittie

From Reyn on January 09, 2005
OMFG!! YOU SUCK!!! I HATE CLIFFIES!! I HATE THEM WITH PASSION!! AND FOR YOU TO SIT THERE AND LEAVE IT OFF AT SUCH A HUGE MOMENT...JEST...JEST....ARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!!

I hate you. >_< You better update soon. This chapter does not go well with my stress.

But other than that, good chapter ^_^
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From Salazire on January 08, 2005
I was wondering, in a few stories I've seen before the Astronomy Tower (and the other towers) have wards against suicide, so if someone just off one the wards would catch and save them. Could that stop Draco was falling and going SPLAT!
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From ANON - mel on January 06, 2005
Hello! I really like this story! I was wondering if you sent out update notices for when your next chapters were done. If so could you put me on it? Thanks Mel
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From ANON - Sophie on January 05, 2005
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES OUT!
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From Reyn on January 05, 2005
wow. I don't know if I've reviewed for this story before or not, but I must say, I love it!! It's got the angst and the romance and the drama and the hints of humor. (esp. with the letters from Malfoy's parents) It's got it all! Keep up the good work and update soon! I wanna see what happens next!
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From ANON - Dadella on January 05, 2005
This is interesting!
It's so damned ANGSTY though!!!

*cries*

lol, angst makes for the best stories, but it's still unhappy...

but I like this...
I can't wait for them to 'reconcile' as it were... Keep all the emotions happy...
although...
that might mean the end of the story....

GAH!!! it's so hard to CHOOSE!!!

happy/story over
angsty/story keeps going

*frusteration*

lol
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From Slytherintwincest1 on January 04, 2005
this is a great fic. But I do Hate it cuz harry is in so much Denial I mean comeon isn't it enough that one of the hates the other there should be at least one that kinda feels all lovey-dovey but not in the cute in cuddely way just you know love. But who am I but a reviewer.

Write more & I shall read more!

Aj
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From ANON - emily on January 04, 2005
i love this story it's so wonderfully written and so sad, please update soon
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From ANON - Remi on January 04, 2005
ombj i love this story! great job i cant wait to see what harry does! yuor the BEST
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From ANON - Priss368 on January 04, 2005
I really love that those boys have some very faithful friends who are determined to help them despite their stubborness! Yay to Millicent & Hermione! May sense come to Harry's brain! This is a really great fic! Please update soon! Priss
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From ANON - Miss Lesley on January 04, 2005
Oh my. It is always a delight when you update.

You are a very intense writer and I love what you write.

I am glad you have given Draco friends, and I am pleasantly suprised that you went with uncommon ones. Millie and Theo.

The letter from Lucius and Narcissa, made me smile. That is actually how I picture old pureblood slytherin familes. Maybe people write about Snape and his bravery being a spy and I laugh. Because the man has no family, no ties to this world so it is easy for him to spy. PPl like Lucius that has a family who may not believe in his cause are trapped because they know what he will do to them, if he turns. So I see Lucius doing everything to ensure that Draco has more options.

Now these two chapters were great. I got the feel of all of the true family dynamics.

Harry is an ass, and Draco should allow him some of the backlash.

And what the hell is Dumbledork and Order doing? They knew how Harry and Draco were found. And they know of the bond. Thus they must have some idea that it is either the lovers or soul bond. Now at least one of them has to be a pureblood that is subject to the bond (Snape since it was expected Draco might bond with him) so they know what could happen. Yet, they have chosen to keep their golden boy in ignorance. Snape should know that my him lashing out at Potter, it would effect Draco so why do it? Dumbledork, should know that if Harry does not reaffirm the bond it could kill him and their goes his tool/pawn.
It has been over a month, how come they don't notice what is happening to the boys.

I think Draco is right about not telling Harry. Harry should have asked not accused since he does not remember. Or he should have asked dumbledork or Promfry for help to restore his memories. Accusing someone of rape (of Body and Magic) and threatening their life is a serious thing. But his attitude torwards Draco's death, is so much like voldie it is scary.

Now Millie - I am shamed of her, going to the muggle born. She should have gone after Potter. That is why I am glad she got caught by Hemione's stupidity when she confronted Malfoy. Can you believe she let Hermione touch, use and hold on to, a Malfoy family Book? What was she thinking. This is information pureboods don't want floating around, so she entrust it to her. And taking the book from Draco without premission was wrong, and would lead to discovery. Not very slytherin. My girl should have copied the relavent chapters that Hermine would need. Limiting the information and Hermione possible damaging, losing or copying of the orignal. She could have shown her the book so she knew the information was true. But not let her have it.

Please continue this story. I enjoy it. And it makes me write my own.

Miss Lesley
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From ANON - Yaoi-dude on January 02, 2005
I LOVE IT! moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoreMORE!
Kepp up the good work.
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From ANON - Monkey on December 31, 2004
Yeah another chapter!!! Pomfrey can be scary. So will the boys be able to stand being apart? is malfoy going to try and help harry or will harry have to sneak into the dungeons? when will harry figure out that he wasn't raped? please update soon. it's still an awsome story. Good Work.
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From ANON - chys on December 30, 2004
hey I like this so keep it up ok! It's unique, I think, I haven't read anything like it in this fandom before!

chys
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From ANON - Miss Lesley on December 29, 2004
Hey, this is a very good story. I am happy that you made Draco Top Harry. But why doesn't Harry remember, is it because he is trying to block out his actions as if he is ashamed? OR was it because of his injuries.

Gosh I so HATE Ron and Hermione. They know nothing yet they are ready to go after Draco. I hope Pansy and blaise beat/hex the hell out of them and teach them a lesson.

I have a questions and requests:

1 - Why hasn't any of the Slytherins visited Draco? OR have they and we just don't know.

2. How will the space between their dorm effect the bond, I mean they were right next to each other and had problems.

3. Will Draco become some touchy feelie gryfindork, that appologizes to Ron Hermione and all muggle borns claiming that it was his father that made him act like he does and then he becomes a powerhouse for the light? I mean I love Draco for being Slytherin and not so nice, it is his nature I hope that Harry accepts him for who is and he accepts harry for who he is.

I kn ow this is your story and I am not pushing for this but asking for something along this line.

1. Can the Slytherins be true friends to Draco? I am disappointed in all the fics that make them hate each other and use each other. I mean I understand there is politics in such circles. BUt these kids had to grow up together. Th very bond that has developed between Harry/Draco show that pureblood familes, stick together and such. So it would be dumb to have hate factions and mistrust amongest them, especially since almost all pureblood families are related.

2. I know that we have seen, meanie Lucius. But can he at least love his son and wife. I can understand that he is a hardliner when it comes in his beliefs that Muggle and Muggle born, hurt magic and endanger their way of life. But does that mean he has to be hateful, and despise his son? I mean what father would see or hear that his son and heir is on his possible death bed and not show up to see what the hell going on.

Please update soon
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