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Reviews for Heart and Soul

By : Silverwolf21
  • From koppe on March 01, 2007
    Great story.
    Would've love a couple of sequels though; first one dealing with Harry/Erin & Draco/Alana after Erin's rescue -- and then one dealing with their oldest children at Hogwarts, falling in love and marrying.

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  • From ANON - e on November 16, 2005
    up date
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  • From ANON - f on October 22, 2005
    keep going this story rules
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  • From ANON - gmac on July 20, 2005
    this fic is one of the best I have read for so long it has me on the edge more chapters please
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  • From ANON - trixrstrange on April 22, 2005
    Brilliant FF, I can't wait to see what happens when the pair finally comes back together again. It's going to be so beautiful. Anyways, I always read, but can't always leave a review. I often times read from a sidekick (you know that little device that Snoop Dogg advertises "Everybody needs a sidekick"), while handy to read basic net on, it doesn't leave the option available for me to review.

    I have read your other stories and find your work brilliant.

    Can't wait to read more!

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From ANON - mrriddler on April 22, 2005
    Eh, well straight H/girl fiction that's reasonably readable is rare enough these days so good work on that. Your content leaves something to be desired though at least from my point of view. It's disconcerting really how...ah freely the female main character seems to couple from both of your major works. It seems like brianna and now erin are looking to be raped, which needless to say degenerate your work into run-of-the-mill woman "shag anything that moves fic." If this WAS what you were going for...*shrugs* then fine, your story. But until ch15-16 in this story, it didn't feel like all those other shag her silly stories, so I'm just warning you.
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  • From ANON - Mark on April 21, 2005
    I really like the story, but don't seem to understand how Erin can so readily accept any sort of advance from Lucius. Even being pleasant has its bounds. And the bit in the last chapter where she is horny just because some is touching her belittles the soul-binding that you have implied - if you know what i mean.

    Keep up the great work though as these complaints are only minor in comparison to the rest of the story.


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    absolutely amazing story!! you HAVE to continue soon, im addicted.
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  • From ANON - augh! on March 11, 2005
    email me when you update!
    AUGH! cliffies suck.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 11, 2005
    Oh dear, I think Erin ought to have finished him off! Great chapter, got a feeling though
    dear brother's going to be back.

    Loved it, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 06, 2005
    I have just read 10 chapters of the most beautiful adult fairytale. Please finish it, will be
    watching out for a update.
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  • From ANON - makotochi on December 22, 2004
    Great story so far, one of the better ones here
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  • From ANON - Ox King on December 19, 2004
    Hey! I like your story. I hope to be reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - Rex on December 17, 2004
    DAMN
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