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Reviews for The Objects of Desire

By : Halric
  • From ANON - mx on February 15, 2005
    The plot is simply great!
    I recomend everyone read this story.
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  • From ANON - Loubie on February 04, 2005
    I love this, it's really clever. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - mx on February 03, 2005
    I suggest you make Harry tell DG about the contract.
    If you don't, you will just end up with a very clich
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 01, 2005
    I'm very pleased to see that you've made this story about more than just the bet... it's a good gambit to connect the Gryffindor/Slytherin pairings, but it has become such a hackneyed device that it's very difficult to keep the story fresh. That you've now woven the Cruciatus potion into the storyline gives it some weight, and a depth that the early chapters were lacking. I'm very much looking forward to where you take the story. [Please forgive the slight criticism, but you might want to give your chapters a final read through to catch the homonyms... there/their/they're and your/you're.]
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  • From ANON - HaryPoter on January 22, 2005
    I guess you're right that they can't just jump right into sex, but Harry and Draco are probably really horny right now thinking about whats going to happen. Because of that, I would appreciate it if they wanked off to take care of themselves ;-)
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  • From on January 10, 2005
    As it is I hope Harry wins, but something else inside wants Draco to win. I know it's wrong,but if it's the only way Draco actually gets to feel something for someone, then so let it be. Maybe you could throw Ron a date or two too. I like it, can't wait for another chapter.

    jeannette
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2005
    I really like this story--it's nice to have a real story and a plot, not just random sexual interactions. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - HaryPoter on January 09, 2005
    The story's starting out awfully slow ... you might want to think about getting to some smut soon
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  • From ANON - hermionebrowneyes on January 03, 2005
    hi ive bin reading your story it quite good i cant wait to see the next chap its good to see a good story like yours
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  • From Halric on January 03, 2005
    Thanks erg.. it's been changed
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  • From ANON - erg... on January 02, 2005
    3) Every effort will be made to clear the OOD's schedule on the night of an engagement, DM/HG Mon, Wed, & Fri, HP/BZ Tue, Thur, Fri. Weekends are open house.
    third rule
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 02, 2005
    Loving it! Was that a intentional or unintentional Darth Vader quote in chapter 2? If it was intentional I love you forever! If it was unintentional at least I know you have a great mind :D Can't wait for the next great chapter or 20 of this brilliant fic! Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - harypoter on January 01, 2005
    I can just feel the sexual tension building; great start!
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  • From ANON - slingy on January 01, 2005
    cool story. it actually has a plot. thats something u dont see very often here :D
    keep up the good work and update soon :D
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  • From ANON - amniarix on January 01, 2005
    Miss Granger, Mr. Malfoy is a hormonal teenager and you are a very attractive young woman, you could have him eating out of your hands if you play him right."

    I can't wait to see how you have Master Malfoy eating out of Miss Grangers so attractive hand! . And the dialogue between Harry and his slytherin girlfriend was great in the 3rd chapter. I love how you are referring back to canon to get the interaction between your characters right, that more than anything else is helping this fic to have a balanced feel. Can't wait for more...
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