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Reviews for The Objects of Desire

By : Halric
  • From on December 31, 2004
    i can honostly see harry actually playing up to someone, it just seems natural, that two of the most exciting guys in school, try to do this with two quiet types that know what they want, but yet they don't.
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  • From ANON - mx on December 31, 2004
    Intressting story on many diffrent levels.
    Especialy since Harry seams to take the "total honesty" aproach, while draco is lieing trough his teeth.
    I wounder who will "win", or if DG will figure out the gameplan ( i think she would, but forgive Harry once he explains in detail ).
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on December 31, 2004
    i really like all the interplay between the characters. it's fun to watch them scheme or plan or whatever it is they're doing. i was thrown for a loop when harry, ron and hermione entered that train car and began talking to daphne. from the second chapter i thought harry had feelings for hermione and now he's head over heels for daphne. and hermione was helping him. it was confusing and rather sudden. i did however like the flirting that went on.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2004
    interesting story so far. i like the fact that harry does in fact have feelings
    for hermione, and i for one are hoping they are extend past friendship.
    I'm aware you are posting this on AFF, which seems to draw in far too
    many smutty stories (for my liking, anyway). i'm hoping you maintain the
    plotline, and make it more interesting than a H/B D/H snog-fest. chapter
    2 has given me hope! update soon, and keep up the good plotline
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  • From ANON - Debbie on December 25, 2004
    This would be much better if you had a beta reader proofread for you. The errors (e.g., distrain{disdain}, die{died} of towards{off towards}) are kind of distracting. Also, there is a VERY popular story in HP fanfiction that already has this title - it is posted on Whispers. You might want to think about changing yours, at least a bit.

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  • From ANON - Jess on December 25, 2004
    Really looking forward to what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Morrison on December 25, 2004
    I really like this story! It's realistic and I can't wait for the smut that will ensue. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on December 25, 2004
    i really liked the second chapter. the first, because of the way it was setup didn't draw me in very well, but the second... i'm hooked. the way draco played hermione, the way harry angsted over draco playing hermione, and the way snape sneered at harry's reaction to draco playing hermione were all so well written. there is only one point that rings false from me. when snape says hermione needs support from someone, why does he think she would believe it was coming from him? hermione doesn't like snape any more then harry and ron. oh yeah, one more thing, Adopt a Slytherin Society, or ASS, is brilliant. it is to laugh!
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on December 24, 2004
    I already love this story. I also loved Snape's speech to Harry when he told him about the bet. I'm still expecting Hermione to be suspicious of Draco's actions, but I'm really looking forward to seeing Draco fall in love with her and vise versa. Let the games begin!
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  • From on December 24, 2004
    thank you for clearing my confusion. i really like stories that have draco as a bastard, that goes for the mud blood, and likes it. i know i'm sick, but i just can't help it. can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - AnastasiaKatarina The Third on December 20, 2004
    I really like the idea. It definetlly has potential to be very funny yet hot.
    Even with the smal details such as Blaise Zabbini being a male.
    Impatientlly waiting for the sequel,
    AnastasiaKatarina The Third
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  • From ANON - jeannette on December 20, 2004
    is a dm/hg and hp/dg or a dm/hg and hp/bz ?
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  • From ANON - Rain on December 20, 2004
    I am completely in love. Great Plot Idea, love your attention to detail about the rules. I can see Harry Ditching his friends to protect them. Draco Malfoy is deliciously evil. If you are looking for a beta let me know.


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  • From ANON - Fionara on December 19, 2004
    Uh, JKR has definitively stated that Blaise is a boy.
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  • From ANON - CWolf on December 19, 2004
    Usually these fics come off as childish and silly to me, but this one shut me up pretty quickly. The characterizations are great and I loved how you set up the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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