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Reviews for The Objects of Desire

By : Halric
  • From wudelfin on October 23, 2007
    well written, hope to see a update soon
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  • From ANON - wes on June 27, 2005
    c'com we want the next chapter i have been waiting forever please post another soon
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  • From ANON - wes on June 27, 2005
    c'com we want the next chapter i have been waiting forever please post another soon
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on June 12, 2005
    "Adopt a Slytherin Society, ASS for short" - so classic. What does WOOT stand for? I apologize if I missed that. You should finish this up. Even though I completely identify with the Slytherins, I think you owe it to the story (and your readers) to give us some good smut. Either HP/DG or DM/HG, I'm not picky. Someone needs to win this bet, dammit.
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  • From on April 13, 2005
    hey great chapter whens the next and when is harry going to get with Daphne soon i hope oh by the way this is wes from the other reviews just to let you know
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  • From ANON - Tybalt on March 22, 2005
    A very good story. Quite intresting. I enjoy reading it, and do hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - wes on March 17, 2005
    good chapter it took a while but if your comp was busted then not much you can do anyway post more soon
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  • From ANON - HeadSorcoressofSlytherinHouse on March 16, 2005
    Hey, I really like this fic. It's very imaginative and skillfully written. You know, even if you don't want them to simply jump in bed together, there are always wet dreams *hint hint, nudge nudge* lol Keep it up, and update soon
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  • From on March 16, 2005
    I hope Draco actually starts to understand that he just can't play with peoples feelings like that. Maybe he will fall more for Hermione, and tear up the bet contract with Harry.
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  • From ANON - wes on March 06, 2005
    awsome harry needs to win the bet and get the girl droco should switch sides along the way so that he can be with hermione and he can convert the other slitherins the school would unit under one banner as it was ment to be darkness would be vanqwished and you have a happy sex filled ending. lifes perfect ;)
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  • From on February 18, 2005
    i loved it when severus got into dracos head, it was cool. please update soon
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  • From on February 15, 2005
    Hi i see that you also post at ff.net as i do.
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  • From ANON - anon no more on February 15, 2005
    I think it's a lovely story. Stick to your guns girl. Don't let the readers push you into a mad dash for sex. What's sex without the tension that accompanies it. I'll tell you a big let down.


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  • From ANON - john the heavy on February 15, 2005
    good work! keep it up lad/lady!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 15, 2005
    I quite like the fact that Harry's having such an easy time of it with Daphne, while Malfoy's having a real slog to get even the slightest affection from Hermione. Of course, it serves him right, and Hermione IS the smartest witch of her generation. But it's nice to see nonetheless. I think your characterization of Draco is quite good. There's not a chance he'd capitulate easily, especially if he's after revenge for his father's incarceration. I can hardly wait to see what happens when Dumbledore gets Ministry approval for the potions project. He's going to be spinning in circles, and with the 'kill him with kindness' routine Hermione is putting up, it will be fascinating to watch him spiral out of his pre-fabricated rut.

    May I offer a little bit of advice of a technical nature? You might want someone else to read through your chapters before you post them. Spell check doesn't correct for words that are spelled correctly but used incorrectly (for example, you've used 'ware' instead of 'wear' for wearing clothing, and 'dear' instead of 'deer' for the deer running in the forest. In each case, 'ware' and 'dear' they're correctly spelled words, merely used in the wrong place. Another set of eyes are really helpful in catching these... we all suffer from these types of things.
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