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Reviews for encounters

By : maddi
  • From MrPlumbean on December 21, 2004
    I liked the story it was very good. It wasn't as graphic as most of the stories posted so you'll prolly get a lot of people who want you to continue it, but I like it as a one shot.
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  • From ANON - wyvern on December 20, 2004
    actually its a really good first start. yes there are spelling errors, incorrect tense and a few words that werent used quite correctly, but a good beta could quickly fix that. I give you kudos for attempting to write in JKRs style (not turning Hermione into a Valley girl always gets high praise from me) and the story had a really nice sexual tension to it.. Do go on with it, it doesnt have to be an involved fic, you can turn it into a series of 'encounters' which I think would be most interesting
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  • From lckarlsson on December 20, 2004
    Are you kidding?? This is sooo good! And I think it's very well written!

    Now, please - please, continue!!

    At least write one more chappie??? (With some smut :o)

    Please!

    I'll put your story on my favourites list, if you continue it :o)

    Love Leonora.
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