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Reviews for And It Hits The Fan

By : kat701
  • From ANON - xidaer on June 10, 2005
    loved the story so far although I am curious about the beta job. I've never been an editor but I'm a big fan of fan fiction, if you don't mind someone new I'd be willing to try. Oh question! If snape is a vamp, where does he get his blood during the school year? Does the DADA techer get to use him as an example during class (joking) Is his favorite candy blood pops? and finally does he have to turn harry in order to mate with him?
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on June 08, 2005
    hi hi well i am likin the story lots, yeah for rebellious potter fics not to mention snape as a vampire that could get interesting! I think ur doing great!
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  • From ANON - Jane_lane on June 06, 2005
    LICK MY BUTT!!!! Thats a pretty good start keep it up! Fuck yea!
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  • From ANON - solana1 on June 06, 2005
    If you still need a beta I would be more then happy to

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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 03, 2005
    Hi Kat Potter,

    I've never Betaed before so I don't have any credentials, but I can spell and my grammar isn't bad. Sorry, I don't know how to do italics, but I'm resourceful and can find out.

    I love this story and your writing is quite easy to read. I don't usually read the vamp stories, but this one intriques me. I love the 'new Harry' and finally, Severus taking that big leap of faith (do Vampires have faith?) to get to Harry. AH, Love! I know it'll be a hard fought war, between them, nevermind with Voldemort.

    I'm usually a no-nonsense type of person, and so will tell you quite outright when things don't flow/go together/or when I don't get it. As I said, I'm resourceful, being an older mom does that to you and I won't bail on you for the duration of this story. I make that commitment now to both you and your readers.

    Please let me know, because I want to see the third chapter up and running.

    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on June 02, 2005
    hey,
    i have never beta'ed before, however i am willing to offer my help if you have not
    found someone else already. i have really enjoyed the first two chapters of your
    story and am anxious for it to continue.
    here if you need me,
    LPhoenix
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  • From ANON - London on June 02, 2005
    Uhhh.....I'm not positively sure what a beta is, but if you're talking about a spell-checker, I can do that, if you like. I'm a living dictionary and my friend Ashley draws Manga and comics like that so I'm always spell-checking her work. And I really like your story so far. Very interesting. Hope you update soon. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 02, 2005
    Hi, I love your story. I love what you've done with Harry's character. And a vamp Sev sounds just right. If you're still looking for a beta, I'd be more than happy to help you out. I signed myself up on a few sites as a beta. Write to above address if you'd like me to beta for you. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - crystal56 (too lazy to log in) on June 01, 2005
    More...noW!
    I mean it!
    I want to read more!
    WAAAAH!
    UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 01, 2005
    I am so glad you have come back to this story. Keep going...please!
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on June 01, 2005
    update soon.... this story is going to be soooo good... i can tell... please update soon...
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  • From ANON - momoko on May 31, 2005
    interesting
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  • From ANON - RebRiddle on April 24, 2005
    IlOVE THIS STORY pleeewwwwzzzzzzz update sooooooon
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  • From ANON - Storm on April 19, 2005
    I like it. I hope you continue this story, I'm interested to see where it goes.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2005
    great
    but you should change the lip ring to an eyebrow bar
    seems more like him
    please update soon
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