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Reviews for Albus's Scheme

By : Acadiaelle
  • From ANON - angel on June 25, 2005
    that was a great chapter i caint wait in till next time ... i fill sorry for hermione and snape a bill should have keep to himself ... well in till next time later

    angel

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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on June 25, 2005
    Slower! Slower updates! I think i am gonna cry....i love this story and it is just getting to the action pact part!
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on June 24, 2005
    It has been a long time sonce i have givena reveiw as most stories are not worth it. This story is and i would like to say that it is one of the best stories i have ever read. I wish for it to be continued to completion. Please update soon again as ther are very few stories that i can read over and over and this is one of them. Please update and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2005
    please update this soon i love this story
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  • From ANON - mugglegirl0908 on May 28, 2005
    Oh I am loving this! Very, very good. Another great story from you.

    I really HATE Mean!Albus, but I've always thought that if Hermione and Severus really DID get together, that Albus wouldn't take it with a twinkle in his eyes and offering Lemon Drops. LOL. I guess his reaction here is closer than most. :-)

    Anyway, I hope you update soon. Oh, and I am SOOOOOOOOOOO excited that you are doing a sequel to The Incident in the Great Hall! It is one of my absolute favourites and I was so upset when it ended before we got to meet the baby. Yay! You have made my day! ;-) Just out of curiousity, when do you expect the first chapter to be up?
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  • From ANON - hells456 on May 27, 2005
    I haven't read your story yet, but I just wanted to say that I think this disclaimer page is a good idea. Many people I have spoken to object to HG/SS on moral grounds and you have dealt with that had on. Brilliant idea.

    One question though, where did you get the two years + that Hermione gained with the time turner? I can't see how she could gain more than 21 days in total. For the 1st term she did a maximum of 3 extra hours a day 5 times a week. For the 2nd and 3rd term she did a third less than that as she dropped divination. That equals less than 21 full days. She only used the timeturner to repeat classes, not whole days, not to give her extra time for studying and homework. She didn't even get extra time to give her time to get to all her classes before they had already started, sshe always turned up a few minutes late, puffing and panting.

    I am now going to enjoy your story, which came highly recommended.
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  • From innogen on May 22, 2005
    I always enjoy updates to this story. Again, I enjoyed Hermione taking Albus down a peg or two after his 'Dark Magic' removal. Her railing leads me to believe that he had the spell cast upon him on purpose, and that he is attempting to have her removed from Severus' life, so that Severus will not survive the war. After all, a spy who is deceased does not have to be recognized or rewarded, or excised from the legal system. Now Snape has more to live for every day: wife, child, friends, leadership...well, husband to leadership ::giggle:: Mr. Hermione.

    I am not certain what it is that Minerva noticed about Hermione so soon. Odd behavior because she was pregnant? That was a little amusing. Also, warning of the curse of breaking the secrecy of the 13. Now, how will Snape convince The DE and Voldemort that he is not a traitor?? By bringing him a lock of hair and letting him riffle through his memories?

    Hmmm....I'm on you FF list, so I will read your next chappie as soon as possible!

    And Albus, he really needs to get a grip!! I mean, Hermione basically *graduated* before she got married. Or, did he conveniently forget that was part of the conditions of her joining the Order in the first place?

    Innogen
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  • From ANON - Fairy of Fire and Fury on May 22, 2005
    I LOVE this chapter as much as the last... (and that is saying something!) Please TRY and update as soon as you can because this is currently my favorite fic consideing my all tome favorite ended rather stupidly!!!

    I WANT MORE!
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  • From ANON - Stormi on May 21, 2005
    Chapter 16 - Albus is being a right bast.... regarding Severus and Hermione. I just can't see what his problem is unless he is jealous or planned to distroy Severus in the end. Guess Albus feels that he won't be able to use Severus as a scapegoat if she's around. Anyways, keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 21, 2005
    We're gonna have to wait longer for the next update *gasp* i don't know if i can wait that long!

    LOL! Just update asap please *cheeky grin* cause you know you wanna!

    And you will be fine with two fics....you are talented enough to have more....but finish these first hmm!
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  • From ANON - angel on May 20, 2005
    man ... i love it i cant wait and now that every body knows about the baby ......man i can wait for the next chapter so i hope you can update....hmm i going to have to read your other story ... well bye for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Gin on May 20, 2005
    Something doesn't make sense. If you have a protective spell that can protect against every spell, including Crucio, why would it be pointless/unnecessary to teach it?
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  • From ANON - magicmistress on May 05, 2005
    Wow that was a very good chapter. Part of me really hopes that it is Dark Magic that is causing Albus to act the way that he is about Severus and Hermione, and part of me just want you to write Albus as the controlling prat that he seems to be.

    In addition the beginning of this chapter is completely HOT!!!!!!! I mean good lord. I think I was breathing hard when I got done with the sex scene. Let me tell you I have read smut in all forms. I like it, makes life more entertaining, And I have to say that this is one of the best that I have read in a very long time.

    B
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  • From ANON - Fairy of Fire and Fury on May 02, 2005
    That last line should go to HELL! Do you REALIZE that if you would have just taken off that last line it wouldn't have been such a cliff hanger... AND I MIGHT HAVE BEEN ABLE TO SLEEP TO NIGHT!

    As you can see I am in love with your story (obviously)

    And I swear if anything happens to Severus or that baby I'LL!-

    Bye!
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  • From ANON - angel on May 01, 2005
    ~crys~why .... please update soon i need to know what happens next!!!
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