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Reviews for Albus's Scheme

By : Acadiaelle
  • From ANON - ladyevilfaerie on March 19, 2005
    WOO HOO! Another chapter I am glad that another one came out and just to let you know I hated Albus before I started reading your story, but now I hate him even more. What he said at the ministry really pissed me off. Just for that I would like to castrate him and hang him with his beard *evil grin*, not that I already wanted to do that to him in the first place *coughs*. Anyway I completely understand why Hermione and Severus held there tempers at the ministry, they didn't want to get into trouble. I loved the chapter and I will patiently await more. TTFN, SAYOONARA!!

    P.S. I hope Hermione announces that she is pregnant soon if that is what you have planned but then again now is really not the best time for pregnancies, but one can only hope *sighs and bats eyelashes*.
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 19, 2005
    Very exciting chapter. That Dumbledore just inspires hexes in his general direction.

    A couple of notes: This was unbetaed? Two misuses of "then" when you meant "than." Misspelling in the title. And during the Auror interview, was Hermione struck dumb in anger at the false allegations? Why didn't she slap Dumbledore for calling her a whore? Was she under a full Body Bind? She slapped Malfoy for less, and she let the whole party of them ride over a feeble objection. It was all very exciting, but I didn't get why she wasn't standing up for herself, why she and Severus both just sat there.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on March 19, 2005
    I loved that Hooch bit, i couldn't stop laughing.....and man, i would hexed Dumbledore if i had been Severus! But then i had no self control!
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  • From ANON - Lana Manckir on March 11, 2005
    UPDATE! LOL i can't wait to know and i have some idea of who's behind it but won't say it. Please hurry ;-)
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  • From ANON - anyah_daoc on March 10, 2005
    Ack! Ya can't leave me like this! Please update soon! Thanks for a great story!
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  • From ANON - Dark Topaz on March 03, 2005
    pleae update soon
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  • From ANON - Unicorn Lady on February 27, 2005
    hmmmmm.... Knowing your devious mind I'm tempted to say that whomever it was he/she was working under Dumbledore's orders to kill Hermione? That would certainly be a plot twist right there! Did I get it right?
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on February 27, 2005
    Oh, now thats cruel ending the chapter like that, very unfair to us readers, to make us feel better we need a new
    chapter to be updated soon, please (I'm not proud I'll beg).

    Great fanfic, thanks..


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  • From ANON - Sami on February 27, 2005
    I Love this story!
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  • From ANON - Stormi on February 27, 2005
    Could it be Albus who is the acomplice? I don't trust him any more.
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 27, 2005
    Irresistable. I can't wait to read the next chapter! (I liked Severus' little inner debate.) (I'm still hating Albus.)
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  • From ANON - Inspire on February 27, 2005
    Albus is looking more and more the likely suspect. Fun story, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2005
    you are evil for leaving it there
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  • From ANON - Drake on February 26, 2005
    Great, great, story. Though I don't understand about Ron and Harry. Didn't they walk in on Severus and Hermione that once? So why are they suprised?
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  • From ANON - KK on February 20, 2005
    please update quickly!!! i love this story! i havent been a big fan of hermione/snape fics but i realli like this one. keep it up please!! can't wait to read the rest of the story!
    Love KK
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