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Reviews for Albus's Scheme

By : Acadiaelle
  • From ANON - Christy on February 15, 2005
    Oh this was a great chapter! I admit I never thought Draco was in love with Severus, I thought it was Hermione. What a great twist!!!!! This story and the plot just keep getting better and better. I do wonder what Draco thinks of his father's death and if he will somehow try and blame Hermione for that as well.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on February 12, 2005
    This really was a great chapter. But Albus is still quite aggrevating. It should be interesting to see how Severus handles the situation with Draco. And I like the fact that Hermione does not bow to Albus. He can be an unbelievable bastard at times. I love the fact that you have Minerva calling Albus on his crap. And personally I hope before the end that Snape tells him exactly what he can do with his displeasure of his marriage. Albus is not the end all beat all, and the love of a good woman can help you move mountains. It is even easier with some extra magic, because lets face it true love is a magic all on its own. Can't wait to see what is next.

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  • From ANON - Moi on February 11, 2005
    I have enjoyed this story from its beginning. I loved this chapter, not just for the lemon--and it was good!-- but for the way they are deepening their relationship, working at figuring things out. A bit of realism in the fantasy. Good work. Can't wait to see what's next.

    Oh, and your reasoning behind the sudden desire to have a baby together is excellent. Consider me a skeptic convinced. (^_^)
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on February 11, 2005
    I really have to feel sorry for Snape - - being manipulated by Hermione like that! LOL Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on February 11, 2005
    The one thing I love about this story is the twists and turns that you do not foresee.
    I almost feel sorry for Severus just when the poor man seems to be figuring out what
    to do another problem rears its ugly head.

    Love the bath scene. Thank for the e.mail.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on February 10, 2005
    Where's the update? The date is the 9th February, 2005, but there is no new chapter, has something gone wrong with posting,
    please correct are waiting for the update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2005
    i got to know what was that spell for
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 02, 2005
    This is one of my favorite WIPs. Your writing is very appealing, your timing is tempting, your grammar is pretty good. I have been looking forward to updates since I stumbled across it while it was still in chapter eight.

    Thank you for allowing Severus to confess, so that Hermione could confess! I thought it was just right-- his cautiousness and her boldness. The fight was delicious, and I so appreciate that you did not allow them to storm off and develop roots of bitterness, but made them face each other and fix the problem. I dislike your Albus-- he seems rather shallow to me; but your treatment of his character is at least consistent, and he's a pretty good foil for the hero/heroine in your rendering.

    And now, if your spells are Latin-based, I'm guessing they're off to make babies. Although I'm not entirely sure why H thought she needed that just now. Severus was remarkably compliant about the whole thing. I hope you're planning on filling in a bit on those issues. Given your treatment of the characters and your past work, I would be surprised by anything else.
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  • From ANON - sheepy on January 31, 2005
    if there was a favourites section here this would in it, it has funny bits and serious bitsit is wonderful, please keep going
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  • From ANON - ladyevilfaerie on January 30, 2005
    Good cliffhanger. I enjoyed the chapter and I hope you will let us know what exactly the spell means in the next chapter. Anyway I await the next chapter, TTFN!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 30, 2005
    I really love this story, apart from wanting to Hex Albus Dumbledore into little pieces, its so full of twists and turns that holds
    the readers interest completely.

    I always look to see if you've updated, this mornings coffee tasted so much better with a new chapter to read.

    Do you know the song "If I said you had a beautiful body would you hold it against me"? well think of the tune this is a bribe.
    "If I said you were a wonderful writer, would you do a update" did it work? I would sing it twice to get two new chapters.

    Best wishes thanks for a great story.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on January 29, 2005
    I know I have probably said this before but you have soooo hit the nail on the head with the way you are writing Albus' character. It seems like everyone writes him as some benelovant grandfather, when he appears to me as a sneak, underhand, manipulative man. Who will use anyone for anything to get what he wants. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. No rush, it is like waiting for a really good kiss. The anticipation just makes it that much sweeter.
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  • From ANON - DROXY on January 28, 2005
    romantic smut for my birthday, how kind of you!
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  • From slygriff21 on January 23, 2005
    Awsome story! I love it so far. I hope you will update again and soon. Please! I wonder how Hermione's parents will react to the news. I can't wait for you to update.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - ladyevilfaerie on January 20, 2005
    Well, Well!!! What have we here? another story about Severus and Hermione? I must say that it is quite catchy. Please keep going *claps* I await more soon I hope!!!! P.S. And what do you mean by deaths?! I hope it's not a war that starts is it who dies? Well I guess I can wait. Well TTFN!
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