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Reviews for Albus's Scheme

By : Acadiaelle
  • From ANON - Sarahantifany on January 19, 2005
    You MUST write more so I have so many questions that NEED answers.
    Please I beg of you write FASTER!
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on January 17, 2005
    I really love this story. It should be very interesting to see who Draco covets, Hermione or Severus. Will he try something before he mentions it to his father? Can Harry come to understand why Hermione loves Severus? I always liked the idea that if they, Harry and Severus, got passed old ideas of what the other was that they would actually like one another. It seems like this might be the begining of a very interest demise of the Dark Lord.
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  • From ANON - MysticSong1978 on January 16, 2005
    Loving your story. Was thrilled to find new chapters!
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  • From ANON - The Cloaked Slytherin on January 16, 2005
    I would like to say that this is one of the best stories I have ever read. I hope you will update soon. I didn't honestly like Albus before, but now I like him even less. I would like to go ahead and say that you have suceeded in making McGonagall one of the most interesting people in the entire story. She understands much.

    Please update again soon.

    ~The Cloaked Slytherin*~^*~
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  • From ANON - SeverusGal on January 16, 2005
    Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 16, 2005
    This as got to be one of my favourite Severus and Hermione stories.

    You are getting better and better, I loved Hermione in the Potions class with the French pupil,
    who was Draco attracted too? Thats added interest and intrigue, very clever the way their rings
    became visable. Yes good story, more please, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Moi on January 15, 2005
    Hmm, the hint at thickening plot... yummy. And Mademoiselle Devereax, wasn't she a whore! Draco is putting me on edge. Of course, that's his purpose, isn't it.
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  • From ANON - kd on January 10, 2005
    Hey, is that it? I sure hope not! I am enthralled and captivated. I have never before seen a plot quite like this one. I think that the characterizations were quite spot on. Dumbledore really is a meddelsome old coot isn't he? Hope he gets what's his! Lol, really, really hope that isn't it for the story. Keep writing eh? lol till later.
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on January 08, 2005
    I am really enjoying this story. I needed sleep 2 hours ago and couldn't stop reading. Please continue with your wonderful story.

    Your love story is along the lines of a basically normal, loving, relationship. You do realise that is almost a misnomer with Severus Snape. Ha!

    Love your story.


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  • From ANON - coocachristy on January 08, 2005
    Terrific story!!! Could you e-mail me when you update?
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on January 06, 2005
    I just found this story and have read it all to date. Very well written! The descriptions and emotion between SS and HG are almost palpable. I think the pacing is excellent - they didn't fall into bed too quickly, and I love the way you've portrayed the darker side of Dumbledore. Not very many people seem to do that, and I think it's nice to see that he isn't all lemon drops and pats on the head. He's a very powerful wizard who is used to having his orders followed and doesn't like it when things do not go according to his plans. Anyway, keep up the good job, and I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on January 05, 2005
    Nice cover for what was interupted by Ron, Harry and Molly at Grimald Place. I am enjoying reading about this love that happens before the war is over. Most of the romances between the two happen after the war, or have something to do with her getting some uncommon magic. This is nice and simple. They fell in love and no one and nothing is going to keep them apart. It is also nice to see that Minerva is on their side, even if Albus is not. There were a few gramatical errors, but nothing terribly outrageous. I will be watching for the next chapter with baited breath.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on December 29, 2004
    I have read both versions of this story. The one on this site as well as the one on FanFiction. In that I am an adult with a very healthy sex drive, I enjoyed this version of the story. It was strong and vivid, but not over the top. Being a woman who enjoys romance as much as I do, both versions touched my greatly. The none explicit version on FanFiction had just enough sexual connotation to it to be seductive, as well as being able to express the tension that I have always felt would exist between these two characters if they were given a chance. They were really meant for each other, whether that was the intention of J.K. or not. It is the way that she wrote the characters, and althought she has not delved into the psychological make-up of Severus, I have often felt that he, like Harry has been taken advantage of by Dumbledore. I am glad you did not listen to whatever demons that told you that this story could never work. It has worked and I look forward to reading any additional chapters that you may add to it. Trust in your instincts and they will not lead you astray.
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 28, 2004
    looks like you will be seeing my reviews here instead of on FFN. This chapter is romantic and funny, I like the enderaments you have them say in private.
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on December 27, 2004
    You are doing a fantastic job with this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
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