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Reviews for Albus's Scheme

By : Acadiaelle
  • From ANON - Carol on December 22, 2004
    This was a really emotional chapter. I loved it. I really like this story. I love the original plot. Hermione's protective magic surrounding Severus was a beautiful image. I really look forward to the next chapter and hope you will be able to updeate soon.
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 22, 2004
    Ok- making me come over to AFF to see the lemons you wrought.


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  • From ANON - Kristina on December 22, 2004
    This is an amazing story! I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Gin on December 21, 2004
    I like this story, however, I think that their marriage was a little fast coming. In my opinion, they should have had at least one more chapter to discuss things, draw the tension out. Like this, I had the impression that the only thing you wanted to do was to get them into bed as quickly as possible. Also, the last bit of chapter six was seemingly out of nowhere. Hermione seems very emotionally unstable and immature throughout this story and Severus seems earnestly cowed, which to me is surprising for a confirmed bachelor. This chapter (6) was also incredibly fast paced compared to the earlier chapters, which to me were more thought out and better developed.
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  • From ANON - Ann on December 21, 2004
    WOW! great chapter! and a great story. I can't wait fir the next installment!
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