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Reviews for Albus's Scheme

By : Acadiaelle
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Samdoria on September 16, 2006
    What a beautiful story! I have spent the most of the day reading it, only taking a small break for some food, I just had to read the next chapter:-))
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 03, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Athena on January 09, 2006
    Great story! I've enjoyed it soo much! You did one of the best jobs I've seen keeping Snape in character while letting him be romantic and in love. I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Shella LaRoche on December 09, 2005
    Quote: "YOU EXPECT ME TO DO WHAT?!"

    You really had me with that. I really expected him to be, well a little bit more snarky and secretive again. As he went romancing his wife instead...did I laugh! That was a nice twist. Besides, I like this version far better than the one at FF. Thanks for taking me again on such a fantasy journey.
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  • From ANON - Alkira Zane on October 06, 2005
    I. Loved. It!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's so hard to find good HG-SS stories, and this was a good one. I absolutely loved reading it, and will probably bookmark it to read again (as well as send to my friends). After this, I'm definately going to check for more of you stories to read. Oh, yeah, did I say I loved this story? Yeah!
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  • From ANON - breastlady on August 29, 2005
    wow! If that old manipulative dick Dumbledore isn't afraid of Snape he should be. He is just damn stupid if he thinks this method of his will split up Severus and Hermione. He's just about faced mutiny twice now. If he forces them to choose the Order over their relationship I would hope the Oder would evolve a new fanchise run by Hermione or even Harry. They could still do all they could to oppose Voldemort but not under Albus' command. It would look like there was division in the ranks of the Order to Voldemort and he would be heartened. Severus could show that Albus was getting suspicious and therefore he had instead concentrated on tricking Harry that he is on his side and would be Harry's new confedant. He roped Harry in by binding Himself to Harry's best freind, Hermione. I mean what would really happen if Severus, Hermione, Tonks, Remus, Shacklbolt and Harry began to question Albus' methods and separate into their own secret order. Leaving Manirva if she chooses and the Weaslys would stick by Albus most likely. Let's start a new style oder where we cover each other's asses then befriend and use death eaters as their own worse enemy. And by the Gods-consenterate on how to take the damn war to Voldemort. Instead of just responding and waiting for a stroke of luck. What if they amassed a large army of witches and wizards who are sick and tired of Voldemort and just won't take any more. There must be a way to rile people up. Would it be any worse morally to use Fudge with the imperious to rile up the massess, than what Dumbledor already does to those he supposidly cares for?
    I'm ready for a Hogwartz muntiny! Someone needs to seriously put Albus in his proper place.
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  • From ANON - breastlady on August 29, 2005
    wow! If that old manipulative dick Dumbledore isn't afraid of Snape he should be. He is just damn stupid if he thinks this method of his will split up Severus and Hermione. He's just about faced mutiny twice now. If he forces them to choose the Order over their relationship I would hope the Oder would evolve a new fanchise run by Hermione or even Harry. They could still do all they could to oppose Voldemort but not under Albus' command. It would look like there was division in the ranks of the Order to Voldemort and he would be heartened. Severus could show that Albus was getting suspicious and therefore he had instead concentrated on tricking Harry that he is on his side and would be Harry's new confedant. He roped Harry in by binding Himself to Harry's best freind, Hermione. I mean what would really happen if Severus, Hermione, Tonks, Remus, Shacklbolt and Harry began to question Albus' methods and separate into their own secret order. Leaving Manirva if she chooses and the Weaslys would stick by Albus most likely. Let's start a new style oder where we cover each other's asses then befriend and use death eaters as their own worse enemy. And by the Gods-consenterate on how to take the damn war to Voldemort. Instead of just responding and waiting for a stroke of luck. What if they amassed a large army of witches and wizards who are sick and tired of Voldemort and just won't take any more. There must be a way to rile people up. Would it be any worse morally to use Fudge with the imperious to rile up the massess, than what Dumbledor already does to those he supposidly cares for?
    I'm ready for a Hogwartz muntiny! Someone needs to seriously put Albus in his proper place.
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  • From ANON - breastlady@sbcglobal.net on August 28, 2005
    I can't help but notice that Albus has been keeping a pretty low profile for the amount of disapproval he has toward Severus and Hermione. I've been thinking about what happened at St. Mungo's when Hermione confronted him. Could it be that Albus Dumbledore is a wee bit cautious of Hermione, maybe even possessing a little healthy fear? I would love to find out he finds Hermione a force even he would be loath to reckon with. Maybe she'll be the one who ends up kicking Voldemort's scaly ass. Also, thank you for the tasty lemons.
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  • From ANON - breastlady on August 28, 2005
    You are incredible! I love love love this story! I have nothing clever to say, just that my heart is in my throat and pounding. I wouldn't mind if she got to hex Albus a few times though. I have always thought he was a manipulative old arse. I don't want to spoil it for anyone who hasn't read HBP so I will only say that I will offer mercy considering his eventual outcome. I am going to imagine this happened first and Hermione will somehow rescue our Severus. Now I must continue reading!!
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  • From ANON - killisandra on August 25, 2005
    That was absolutely fucking brilliant. Loved it! Sorry, I haven't come back to this story in a while and was so happy to find it had an ending. It was fantastic. I hope you continue writing.
    Blessed Be,
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - Jo on August 24, 2005
    I have enjoyed reading your story, thanks very much
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  • From ANON - mya on August 22, 2005
    Wow, I don't even know where to begin. This story was twisted, stranger, amazing, touching, and overall great. I spent the last day reading it completely through (gotta love having a day off to do absolutely nothing). I couldn't "put it down" (or shut it off I guess) I hope you continue to write stories as great as this. ~*~mya~*~
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  • From ANON - angel on August 20, 2005
    i love how you ended the story and i just love the story and i cant wait in till you make a new story ....i would love to read you are a every every good author and you show keep up with the good wor and in till next time later

    angel
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on August 20, 2005
    I have enjoyed reading your story. I thought that the romance between Severus and Hermione was a little quick moving at first, but we all know they are meant to be don't we? ;-) I did like your take on Albus - that the spell only enhanced his innate opinions and attitudes, because I've always thought that the truth of his character lay much closer to the one you've written than the twinkly eyed chap we see in most stories.

    Thanks for writing.
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