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By : PinkCorsair
  • From ANON - Moi on April 25, 2005
    I thought at first Hermione should find the Malfoy ring, but if it were just a matter of looking in shops until it was found, Malfoy could be doing that as well. Of course, he's looking for the ring, not Snape, not necessarily. So I think Hermione should come across one of his potions that he and Lisa are brewing together. Since they are starting small, wouldn't he have to label his vials by hand, and his handwriting would surely be distinctive? I can't recall without rereading, but is Snape planning on selling potions to Muggles or wizards? If he's selling to Muggles, then Hermione's nutty Aunt (fill in the blank) who's into homeopathics and herbs could have purchased it. That would certainly prevent other wizards from seeing Snape's distinctive handwriting.

    So are you fishing for ideas, or did you want to see if someone could guess your intentions?
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  • From ANON - Miari on April 25, 2005
    Given that Severus asked his young find to help him make potions.... Perhaps some holiday break Hermione could be home with her folks and go shopping and pop into some health food shop (nicking this idea from another fic) which is where a potion would likely be sold, all natural ingredients and such, and recognize that penmanship on the label that she saw on scrolls for years. That would be adequate proof.
    LOVE this story. MORE please!
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  • From on April 20, 2005
    I like it. I'm glad you didn't leave it off at the first chapter. Can't wait for more! I'm not the one for harry potter fics, but yours are great.
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 18, 2005
    I am so happy that you have added a chapter. In fact, I was thrilled when you continued it with chapter 2, and here we are, chapter 3. I am astonished at the twist-- the concept of a Floramagus is fascinating! Obviously it's innate, as Metamorphmagi, unlike Animagi (learned). And of course she and Severus are going to become self-supporting and use magic.... Can't wait for ch4 !
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  • From ANON - Alpha on March 18, 2005
    What a great story! Nice parallel with the young girl who reminds me of Hermione. Look forward to the rest. I always enjoy your work. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on March 17, 2005
    I like this!! Please continue!! Nicely written.
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on March 17, 2005
    This story is awesome i love it so much, i know it took you a long time to update but could you uupdate soon again i love it and i want more just write write wrtie and i will read and post.
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  • From ANON - Nobis_Solom_Non on March 17, 2005
    Nobis likes it, she thinks you should update!
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  • From ANON - Erica on February 20, 2005
    Please do go on with this story. I'm very, very eager to see what happens next, whether the others find Severus again, and what happens with Hermione and Severus if anything. I think you're an awesome writer.
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 18, 2005
    Go on! Go on! This is a bit of a twist on the usual Hermione/Snape, and I am anxious to read your treatment of it.
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  • From SphinxFantasy on February 11, 2005
    Definately interesting and unique, not a doubt about that. Snape? A muggle? I wonder how he could possibly be handling that one. I wonder if he remembers what happened to him... would be interesting if he didn't. Perhaps Hermione might find him and help him remember who he was? Who knows (except you). lol Anyways, I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 09, 2005
    I am SO glad you didn't leave Snape dying on that hilltop! It's also nice to know he decided to be a thorn in Voldemort's arse. And having him sell Malfoy's signet-- a nice touch! I'm really looking forward to the next installment!

    If I didn't say it about chapter 1, I'll say it now: I also greatly appreciate that you know how to write well. I tend to get distracted by mechanics, even with a really GOOD story, and I'm very grateful that I can focus on your delicious tale without wading through my compulsion to mark up a hard copy with a red pen. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - daygonna on February 09, 2005
    definatly continue, this story had alot of promise. i look forward to more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on February 09, 2005
    I really don't understand why I didn't review before, when I thought it was a one off, because I enjoyed the chapter very much and
    had tears in my eyes at the end. Now I discover it's the beginning of one of your stories. Brilliant! However somehow I just can
    imagine Severus Snape living in the muggle world, but it seems that not only is he living, he's coping beautifully.

    You ask how was it? It looks like it's going to be a really complex and thoroughly intriguing story.

    Will be watching out for updates or if you have one please add me to your update list. Thank you for the start of a great fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Marik_Lover on February 08, 2005
    I think you shood keep going.
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