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By : lightgoddess
  • From ANON - Irihi Safaia on April 07, 2005
    That was wonderfully angsty. *dabs at her eyes* If I wasn't sick with strep, I'd cry.
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  • From ANON - Papaya on April 07, 2005
    Good chapter, but it makes me angry, because I think I have a pretty good idea what Sev's going to reveal next. If I'm right it's something like 'his father was very lonely after his mother was gone.' Am I right? And please don't misunderstand . . . I'm not angry with you for writing it or using it in your story because it fits very well, it's just a sore spot with me and it makes me angry that situations like that happen.

    Other than that . . . really good work! The depth of your characters is still wonderful, and the flow of events is very fluid and true-to-life. I can't wait to read more! Thanks, as always, for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!

    P.S. I'm also enjoying several of your other works, and am looking forward to more of them, too! ;-)
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  • From ANON - DarkRose12 on April 07, 2005
    God the angst! Another wonderfully written chapter - definitly put me through the emotional wringer. I feel so incredibly sorry for them both! Like I just want to hug them - people in pain make me want to help in any way I can. I know that I also demanded smut, but this chapter was definitly worth putting that off. Thank you for updating!
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  • From ANON - Relicwitch on April 06, 2005
    Nice piece of angst! As usual you managed to convey the feelings of Harry and Sev beatifully.
    The panic attack of Severus was well written and i almost cried at the chapter.
    I loved this chapter.
    Carry on, woman, but next time make us smile a little, ok?
    LOL
    See you around!
    Relic
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Black on April 06, 2005
    At least they're being open now. A whole lot more skeletons, but I know they'll make it through.

    Blessed Be
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  • From ANON - Onyx Dragonfly on March 29, 2005
    This is a truly wonderfully written story. The plot line carries itself, and the wonderful description only adds to it! I'd feel funny if I left the review at that though. My creative writing classes tell me that I should add something to the story, so here goes...

    Your descriptive writing is beautiful. Try adding a few more here or there. There are times when they are warrented and I wanted to read your beautiful prose.

    That's really it. I could care less if the next chapter is clean or full of the ever present fuck bunnies (although we all love the second).

    Thank you for a fantastic story (and a nice presentation of circle casting ;) )

    -Onyx


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  • From ANON - antipyro on March 25, 2005
    lightgoddess,

    Just found and read all 24 chapters. Love the twists and turns, it's really imaginative. Great writing style with appropriate grammar and spelling, it always helps. Just loved the circle bit and thanks for keeping it not wiccan/pagan. Not that I don't like that stuff, but not here.

    As for the next chapters, read that plural, Harry needs to start having angst, some on Severus' part wouldn't hurt either. It would make Harry trust him more to know he's not alone and someone does understand what he's going through.

    Well, of course Harry topped with Hermione, how could he bottom with her????? Maybe I just don't understand M/M sex. It might help Harry to conquer his lack of self assurance if he did top Severus, just once at least.

    Yes, lots of smut and parseltongue smut and long, slow tortuous smut and lots of descriptive scenes of tight bodies, shivering and moans and panting. MORE, MORE, MORE.

    So, just how long will you take to write all that????? Lots of cookies, chocolate and whatever beverage your muses like to get you to write soon. Please email me with information on when you update.
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  • From ANON - mirestelfea on March 24, 2005
    Wonderful story, every time I come across it I have to read it again. As for your question, i am sure it has already been answered by the four but just in case. I think that the nightmares is a good idea and for some reason i find myself leaning to see a glimpse inside Snape's mind. I am sure that alot of issues have come up with what just happened. Oh well no matter how you write it i am sure that it will be great.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on March 10, 2005
    Goodness I absolutley adore this story!

    Umm.. I think that Id rather nightmares over smut in the next chapter, and have Severus comfort Harry
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  • From on March 08, 2005
    I finally got a username! LoL. Loved this chapter! *thinks* Damn... I'm not sure which one I want! I want smut, but I also want nightmares... Majority rules on this one. But whichever one...

    Nightmares: Severus is comforted by Harry.
    Smut: Harry bottoms.

    Blessed Be!
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  • From ANON - greenangel on March 08, 2005
    hey i love your story and i think you must put in the nightmare and the smut in one chapter please come back soon with another chapter.
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  • From ANON - wanessa on March 08, 2005
    hey there!
    I'm very glad you have finally decided to update this story. i love the new chapter, it's really good.
    well, as for my opinion, i think you could do something half and half, not too much angst and not too much smutt... maybe a nightmare or two, but snape being all kind and stuff to harry, like, advising him, comforting him, ... in his own way...
    harry bottom!! snape top!! ^.^
    thank you for your e-mail!!
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  • From ANON - EmeraldEnchantress on March 08, 2005
    Hi! I just found this story, and I really love it! I love the way that you write the characters! For the next chapter, I don't personally have a huge preference between angst or smut in this case. As long as the angst doesn't take over the story! I do think that if you do angst, that Severus should have the nightmares, to give Harry some more understanding that he hasn't had a very nice past either! And so Harry can comfort him of course! If you do the smut, I do think that next chapter, Severus should be bottom, relinquish some control! I also love the fact that Hermione owns a BDSM Club! She isn't a favorite character of mine in the least, but I do think that this is a new and interesting take on her! Anyway, please update as soon as is possible!
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  • From ANON - DarkRose12 on March 08, 2005
    Yay!!!! An update! Wow, that was wonderful *happy squeal*! I think that they should go to bed and both of them can reflect (and maybe angst) on all of these new ideas about each other (sort of 'if I tell him this, he might...'), and in the morning they can share what they've learned before the smut can begin (so we get the best of both worlds). I especially loved the idea of calling on the Mother for advice - how creative! Eeeee, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on March 08, 2005
    Yay thanks for the extra long chappy. I recognised the magic circle ritual and think it is a nice touch for you to share your beliefs with your readers if indeed they are your beliefs. I also noticed the lack of description when came to the lord and lady and commend you on it.

    Well ndone update and see you later.

    *Eowyns elixure
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