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Reviews for Revenge of a Slytherin

By : HexxKitten
  • From ANON - Sarah123 on February 22, 2005
    Oh, and Flourish & Blotts is in Diagon Alley, not Hogsmede. Honestly, I know the point of fan fic is to make the world your own, but that usually means within certain confines of the world as written by the original author.
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  • From ANON - Sarah123 on February 22, 2005
    1. Generally *only* straight A students get into Oxford and Cambridge, unless daddy gives enough money to build a new college to one of them! I doubt this random relative left her enough money for that. Even if they did, would she want to get into uni that way?

    2. Why would Hogwarts students arrive in Hogsmede in a carriage? They walk, the village is only just outside the school grounds!

    Quite enjoying it apart from those two things that just bugged me a bit!
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  • From ANON - shedraconis@yahoo.com on February 22, 2005
    Woohoo!! I think you turned out a couple chapters on me there, eh? Great again, a really great story. I hate she tried to poison him though, the sex was awesome!! Well now you know what is on my brain. lol!! Till next time...........
    Tootles!! ;-)
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  • From ANON - caleb on February 21, 2005
    I love it! Cannot wait until the next update, you've really got me hooked!
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  • From ANON - loone_drow on February 20, 2005
    I'm really sorry, but can you say Mary Sue? Perfect body, perfect personality....almost as interesting as a dust bunny under the sofa. Maybe try to make your characters more realistic and three dimentional and you might have a good story on your hands.
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  • From ANON - Saryn on February 20, 2005
    This story has a my two favorite characters, Malfoy and Snape. It's a great story, and I do hope that there will be more of it. The only thing I don't like about it is that Snape is very fluffy bunny. That's so not to character for him. Otherwise, it's great and hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - mayfair on February 20, 2005
    Nichol raised her hands and whispered
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  • From ANON - Shannon on February 18, 2005
    This is fucking awesome so far!! I just read the first 16 chappies and I LOVE your Lucius! He is so yummy!! I hope you update soon! Do you have an update sight or something, so I know when you do??
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  • From ANON - May on February 14, 2005
    OOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOO!! You DID NOT! just do that woman.

    *goes hunting for Hexx to force her to give up more of the story*

    EEEEEEEE

    Come on woman cough it up :)
    May
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  • From ANON - Vermillion on February 13, 2005
    I would, of course, have loved anything that involved the lovely Lucius, but your story is well-written and your descriptions of him show an obvious fascination for the man. I can't wait to see what happens next. And update Tavington soon, too!
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  • From ANON - Claire on January 22, 2005
    This story is so good! I love your writing style, it is so planned out and just like...flows, unlike some other authors here who can't write for their lives. It makes the experience even more enjoyable while reading your story.

    The plot is also amazing! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!


    xoxo
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 17, 2005
    Great story. I hope Lucius falls in love with her and she with him. I think Lucius is more than capable of getting rid of his wife. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dracosballduster on January 05, 2005
    LUCIUS DOES NOT FUCK MUGGLES! PERIOD!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 04, 2005
    Hexx,

    First 5 chapters are absolutely great! Please keep them coming! Wonderful use of imagery and keen details make this a very exciting read - and yet so similar to Rowling's personal style (minus the smut of course). Truly this is a great side story about one of the most intriguing HP characters - I'm definitely hooked. I honestly cant wait for more! What a great start you are off to - keep them coming and plan for one LONG book because you've got to keep us satisfied until the next HP is released in June!!!!

    ~M~
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  • From MidnightLilly on January 04, 2005
    Lucius is one sick fuck, I'd like someone to get into his dreams and break his spirit.
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