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By : DeirdraDomain
  • From ANON - Avid Reader on August 07, 2016

    I was really enjoying your story, the sweet romance and the interesting changes and detail you put into characters (making Hermione a Catholic was a nice little note, things like that). I have a tendency to stop reading when a story loses me sadly. The quick jump into sexual relationship with the boys almost did it for me, I would have liked to see a bit more tension grow between them first. You pulled me back in with the interesting scene on valentines day. Unfortunately you lost me completely when Harry learned of Draco though. I just couldn't believe your characters anymore. He didn't show enough anger or loss you would think to have with someone finding out their lover was dead. When Ron made those comments I was waiting for harry to jinks him or somethings (considering he has JUST learned that Lucius had killed him). i pushed on to the rest of the chapter but at the end of 8 I stopped. I hope the rest of the story turns out well. please keep writing, I do like your style, even if the reaction you have your character portray is a little subdued considering the intensity of the plot you chose to use. 


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  • From HeartStar on August 21, 2012
    very nice well done... I look forward t more of you r stories.
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  • From anniea on November 09, 2007
    i would like to know why it was left untitled very good hoping for another wonderful piece of work from you real soon *kisses*
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  • From ANON - Miss on December 18, 2005
    When I read this story, and all the author's notes, I can only assume that some, though not all, had some trouble withwhatyou were writing. I don't agree. It's not what we usually read, it is not what most of us would expect, but it was cleverly done. It might not have an obscenely large amount of details, or be perfect in every little detail, but it was a good story. It is actually only one of a few good stories I have found here, and the only one good enough to get me to review it. No arrogance, just my honest opinion that it was good. The highest praise I can give you.
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  • From ANON - jess on October 06, 2005
    i like it really sweet sad that draco died though but it did serve it's purpose and he wasn't forgotten

    yay dumbledor died!
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  • From ANON - momoko on October 03, 2005
    good story
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  • From ANON - lasair on July 27, 2005
    on chapter 4 so far, loving it love new harry and drake, a 3some with snape is very very appealing:))))
    suprise u had to do the explaining list or am i the ony one who thought all that was obvious. off to finish the rest of the story(its complete but so brill had to reveiw b4 finishing it!).x
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on April 30, 2005
    I like your perspective...wasn't too crazy about losing Draco but I am a Snarry fan as well. good work.
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  • From ANON - BrattyWitch on February 09, 2005
    this was one of the best fic's about harry turing dark that i've ever read!
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  • From ANON - maxine on January 25, 2005
    ok so i dont mean to be a major bitch hear or anything, however, if harmione is so devoulty catholic, she wouldent have been in hogwarts, because wichcraft is a sin. and also she would have never taken divination, because those who tell the futchure will forever have their heads cut off in hell. (so said my preist)
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  • From ANON - winterraven on January 18, 2005
    excellent, excellent story! i loved every moment of it and i will be amongst the ones to ask for a sequel, so please write one! *hugs and kisses*
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  • From ANON - LadyNight on January 15, 2005
    I have to admit that this was a great story. I kinda got mad when you killed Draco but i let it go...lol...can't wait for the ending, can Ron and Hermione suffer a little for the agrevation they caused Harry? if not thats okay, they only real issue i have is how come this story doesn't have a real name?
    Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Priss368 on January 14, 2005
    Excellent! I wasn't sure of reading on in this fic when it became apparent that Draco was going to be killed, but I'm glad I did! I hope Dumbledor gets what he deserves! If Harry joins Voldie prior to Dumbledor doing his mischief, it'll be wicked! They could conquer the world! I know of a really good Harry/Voldemort story that is really amazing. It's called "Possession" by Jade Tatsu. She's posted her backup on this website with the primary being ff.net. The ff.net one is up to chapter 68! The smutty details are here of course! Please keep up the good work! This is really good! Priss
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  • From Salazire on January 14, 2005
    Stupid Dumbledore, like Harry ever going to trust him again. I can't wait until Dumbledore's plan backfires on him completely. Even better when he sides with Voldemort once he discovers that Voldemort disapproved of Lucius' actions. Dumbledore was so wrong when he said, "He will not leave us for that monster! He will stay where he's needed and not falter from the path I have chosen for him!" And he pretty much just lost himself the war with that one line.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2005
    I disappointed that you are stop the Harry/Draco pairing but I look forward to Harry Snape part. Please forgive me spelling erors as I not from Engish speak country.
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