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By : DeirdraDomain
  • From ANON - Kunai Blitz on January 06, 2005
    aww.... and i actually liked Drake >.< Cant wait to see what Harry does. I love your fic. keep it up ^_^
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  • From ANON - Priss368 on January 06, 2005
    This has been a good fic so far. I have to say though that if this is a deathfic-Draco getting killed during the summer by his father or Voldie-you should make sure that is in your summary. Based off of the last sentence in the last chapter, that's what I'm assuming. Priss
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  • From ANON - Cristina on January 01, 2005
    I Love it!!!!!!! Umm... Is this story will be DM/HP/SS,mmmmmm........LOVE THOSE THREE
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  • From ANON - shade on January 01, 2005
    I tried to read it (note the tried). Paragraphs are essential. It is impossible to read and follow as one big paragraph. It looked interesting, but if the formatting doesn't change it just isn't feasible to spend time trying to decipher it. Sorry.
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  • From ANON - Spiral Breeze on January 01, 2005
    This story is beyond hot. I love it. It's well written, detailed and the sex is amazing. I love how you made Harry's appereance change. I love guys with long hair!! Anyway, keep up the good work, it's brilliant!
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  • From ANON - SMalfoy on January 01, 2005
    Well, I think you have a good premise (not original, but interesting), but Harry's sudden change is not explained so well. We don't get any sort of inside look into Harry's POV, and Draco's change is just so drastic from the book. There could be more dialogue, as you explain a lot of things just in description, and their relationship moved very fast.

    On the other hand, I do like Harry's changes (he seems more mature in a depressed sort of way lol), but why did he choose Potions to excel in? Why not DADA? Maybe you explained and I just missed it. But you have a good grasp of vocabulary, and a good plot to work with, so with a little editing, it should be a great story. Good work!!
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  • From ANON - Katy Bohlen on December 31, 2004
    OK, there's really only one thing that I'd like from you, and that's to put some spaces inbetween about 4-5 sentences or so, that way it's not all just one big long paragraph(it makes it easier to find WHERE you are in your reading AND it's alot easier on the eyes). OK? I'd be sooooooo thankful if you'd do that, cause otherwise: IT'S GREAT!


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  • From ANON - spikeprop on December 31, 2004
    you need to reformat you post. It is completely unreadable. I wasn't able to read the chapter because my eyes couldn't focus. Use paragraphs. Put double spaces between paragraphs.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2004
    No Please More!! and while you're at it come out with the Harry as a slut story that would make my day. Anyways this is great. Different not so heroic Harry!! Well Done. Merci!
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  • From ANON - LadyNiteRaven on December 31, 2004
    Cool story so far, keep going please.
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