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Reviews for Summer with Draco

By : ladyblaze2511
  • From ANON - Dadella on January 02, 2005
    *holds out biscuit*
    Muse's shouldn't go hungry...

    lol

    and the sex scene was fine! I don't have any suggestions, but I will say that the best way of learning to write them is reading other's, and deciding what feels good and what doesn't...
    ...
    *snicker*

    good job, D...

    ANYwho: When I saw Harry and Seamus in bed, I was like ""oh... WINK!!... ROCK ON!!""
    lol
    and THEN when I saw them breaking up, I was like ""NO!!""

    lol, I'd've much rather had Harry and Draco going at it, deSPITE Seamus, and then him finding out later...
    lol

    that's just my sadistic, 'lets cheat on our lovers' nature...

    *shakes head at self*

    anywho: great job on the quick updates! I've seen quicker *wink wink* but not too many people get them out within any decent amount of time...
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  • From ANON - Jolande on January 02, 2005
    I like your story so far. I dislike that Harry was with Seamus, I dislike the sex scene (only because it was Harry/Seamus, not because it's badly written)
    About your sex scene, how about if you draw the pleasure out, this one was awfully rushed. And if you describe more details, that makes it more fun.

    Now, go sit behind your computer and write more, you promised rimming!
    *tries to glare to get you to work*
    ...

    *fails miserably in glaring and smiles*

    Good luck with the rest of your story.


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  • From ANON - chocoholic on January 02, 2005
    Well, well, well, this is most intriguing! I am very curious as to how this summer will turn out to be. Please post more soon!! This is a great story.
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  • From Slytherintwincest1 on January 02, 2005
    seems nice though the sex scene wasnt that bad really, cuz mine are horrible so have no fear your not alone, and hurry up with the Drakie-ness I love him so much!!!!!!!!!!!

    Aj
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  • From ANON - Loki on January 02, 2005
    I like. I like alot. *Giggles* So what, Draco and Harry alone in the House? *crosses fingers* Can't wait. Update soon.

    Oh, and if you're still looking for a beta I'd love to help (especially if it means I get the story before anyone else does ^_~) I've betaed several times before and written my own yaoi fic (not on AFF yet unfortunetly). Anyway, email included, so contact me if I can be of help.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Dadella on January 02, 2005
    What WAS that sly wink all about?
    *thinks*

    and I'm liking this...
    it's really intriguing...

    the story line proves for some fun...
    the two of them cooped up without anyone coming or going...
    er...
    poor choice of words *falls over laughing*

    ...
    yeah, it's time for bed...
    PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
    I know of at LEAST two people who would like to see more!!
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  • From ANON - Fayth on January 02, 2005
    fast updater, great story so far. I like you :) please continue.
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  • From ANON - Lani on January 01, 2005
    This is a good start :) The summary sounds interesting, looking forward to reading more. Please update soon!
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