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Reviews for Trains

By : Seraphix
  • From faithmisplaced on January 08, 2006
    From now on, try to stay in one tense.
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  • From ANON - HarleyD on January 08, 2006
    Wow.

    Seriously... that was devestating. I'm not even sure what I feel about it...

    it was good. very very good. well written, I liked the way you wrote it, it was very unique and captivating.

    A lot of crap gets written in fanfiction so it is a true rarity to get to read a story by such a talented writer.

    Simply incredible.
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  • From ANON - Elisel on January 08, 2006
    could you please kill ron... pretty please with a cherry on top. I know its a one shot but killing ron would be so good...
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  • From ANON - Threesisters on October 04, 2005
    Wow!! That was so intense to read, I'm pretty sure it must have
    been very hard to write. I don't know what you were hoping to
    acheive but I found it thought provoking.
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  • From ANON - Nattie88 on October 02, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! That was...omg...FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...WOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW...lol..that seriusly was amazing.....let there be more!! if there is more plzplzplz email me!!! omg...it's deploro_anima@hotmail.com omgomgomg..that was great..
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 07, 2005
    I've read this before and it floors me everytime.
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  • From zentiis on June 25, 2005
    holy crap! that was brilliant, excellent writing and plot.
    seriously great stuff ^_^
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  • From ANON - mortal on June 25, 2005
    weirdly wonderfull... great origional story line....... poor draco! youve traumatized him for life!
    keep up the good work any way!
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  • From ANON - strawberry poo kmoo on April 04, 2005
    That was so awesome! : tries to describe awesomeness, but fails :
    I really liked that it was in the presetnt tense, it's always so neat reading stories like that, seeing as most are written in the past tense.
    It was odd that Draco pushed him away when he seemed to want him to kiss him. XD
    I also really liked the thing where Draco had said something about being figuratively penetrated by evil, and then, well XP. It was awesome though ^_^^_^
    Even though this is great as is, and it might wreck it if you did, I want to see a sequel of this XD. Your writing style is so awesome! (I have used awesome 4 -- now 5 times -- in this XD)
    -spk
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  • From ANON - ura on April 02, 2005
    Could you write a sequel, please? I like the story a lot, but it is too angsty and too open ended. Harry could earn Draco
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  • From ANON - Lain Liffith on March 12, 2005
    I... can't... breathe.

    that

    holy shit.

    RON!

    mother
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  • From ANON - Jo\' on March 06, 2005
    It was a cool story. I exspecially liked the way you had the theme of opposites throughout it. You have a great gift of making believeable complex characters (I know they're not technicly your characters, but you know what I mean). That was a little creepy what you did to ickle Roniekins, but also a nice way to show how much trust has been betrayed in their lives. Well, as I said, it was neat and set a mood that was very much felt and wonderfully retained. Keep up with your writing.

    P.S. If you haven't already read them, I think you would apriciate Anne Rice's Vampire Chronicles. The have almost the same mood as your piece.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 02, 2005
    What did Draco mean about only Hermione left? Was she cursed as well? Oh how horrible! Harry raped Draco who he came to care for and Draco raped by the man he felt safe with and started to care for as well. Now there is nothing. Not even forgiveness. Will you continue this? Or leave the story here heartbroken and shattered?
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  • From FatalSuccubus on February 27, 2005
    YOU EVIL PERSON!!! How can you write a story that good and leave it as a one-shot?!!! I Demand You Write A Sequil!!! NOW!!! ...please? pretty, pretty please, with a Harry on top? Honestly, I need another part, I will beg you, I will service you, I will do Anything!!! Please? If you don't I hold you responsible for the phyciatrist bills!

    That was quite possibly the most amazing fic I have ever read, I adore it. It was so good, and so bad, and soooo good. Please, write another chapter? Just for me? You could send it in an e-mail if u don't want to post it, but make it a happier ending, please? Okay, enough begging, I con't expect you to bow to my whims...yet...but gosh darn it, that was fan-bloody-tastic! Ok, long review, I love your story, and would love to see a happier ending added, the end. MOO, love ya!
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  • From ANON - ura on January 12, 2005

    Cool story, what I call "powerful". Is it the end? Please write at least one more chapter!
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