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Reviews for Power Struggle

By : DepravedAngel
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From LKinko on July 10, 2005
    Great Start! You have to keep going. Please!
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  • From on May 04, 2005
    It sounds good so far. I can't wait 'til it gets going. I love Hermione/Lucius fics and I've wanted to read one where it's after the war where Voldemort won and Hermione is under the control of Lucius. I think this'll be good and I'll keep checking back for new chapters. Also, if you ever need a beta, I'm welcome for the job.
    ~Bellezza
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  • From ANON - fluffley on March 07, 2005
    come on you have got to finish this!!
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  • From ANON - Angel on January 10, 2005
    I like it. Certianly has potential. And by no means is it boring or overplayed. It was well written. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Jewels on January 08, 2005
    Only one chapter? A good one, an inticing one, one that makes me want more.Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Jess on January 08, 2005
    Good so far, I'm curious to see where this goes. Update soon! =)
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  • From ANON - robin on January 06, 2005
    ok i have set the timer 30 sec i like the L/H pareing and i think the dinamic between hg and dm gives plenty of opretunity for plot twists. i will enjoiy reading more if you continue. dam i went over time ..... oh well
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  • From pinkyheather on January 04, 2005
    This is a very good start. I so can't wait to read more of this. Wonderful job so far.
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  • From ANON - EmZ on January 04, 2005
    Not Bad, please update soon and email me when u do!
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  • From ANON - LaLa on January 04, 2005
    I like this alot! I'm soo glad you've written this there need to be way more stories with the lucius master/ hermione slave thing! Cant wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2005
    Interesting so far....This pairing isn't done enough justice, and your story seems to have given it a different twist.....
    More please!
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  • From ANON - Sali on January 04, 2005
    Very good- looking foward to the next bit.
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  • From ANON - the earth guide on January 04, 2005
    This is a good start. It could go anywhere at this point. I am a sucker for "nice" endings so I have to beg that L ends up in love with Hr. One suggestion though, please please don't make Hr a weak-witted wimp. I mean I know it's fic and all but part of what's so delightful imho about her is intelligence, spunk and resourcefulness. I think she would find a way to turn L's mind games back on him Of course she would not win all the time as he is so much older and better at subterfuge than she is ;). Perhaps you can have some kind of tension between L and D and she could play off of that in order to better her own position or attempt to escape? Good sorry for trying to write your fic for you! LOL
    Anyway happy writing.
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  • From ANON - hermionebrowneyes on January 03, 2005
    wow this is so awsome i cant wait for the next chapter your real good hurry please ilove it so far
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