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Reviews for In the Blink of an eye

By : metoo2
  • From ANON - AquilaLorelei on January 05, 2005
    I give this 3 1/2 out of five stars. Half-a-star deducted for grammar quirks and the full star for some plot points.

    *Completely* original premise, and I have to say I approve. I would never have thought to make Hermione a Pureblood--
    To me it took away some of her "specialness," but you make this *fascinating.*
    Look most forward to seeing what's coming up next!

    *However*--There really *should* be more emotion displayed between the characters, British or no!
    (The British are hardly renowned for their emotional availability...)
    A mother who had raised her daughter for 18 years would *not* just go and say "Have a nice life, Dear" when confronted with the idea that this daughter was leaving the safety of hearth and home for an involvement in Dark politics.
    Nor would the announcement of Hermione's being adopted go over so easily, despite the fact that both her and her mother are rational people.

    At any rate, I've rambled on enough--Mostly, *keep writing!*

    Regards,
    AquilaLorelei


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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on January 05, 2005
    The idea is not new, but your take on it is interesting and has me hooked wanting to read more. Its a very good opening chapter, and a few misspelled words but nothing that took away from my enjoyment of the chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - emma261 on January 05, 2005
    I like it so far. It's a different spin on the whole story. Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 05, 2005
    oh, please do continue but please don't make harry and ron too nasty/mad at hermione! why can't they ever think about HER when these things happen?

    Draco's reaction should be a blast. ha-ha! And Snapes, too!!!
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  • From ANON - pinkyheather on January 05, 2005
    this is a somewhat good start. You really should find a beta to work with you. I like the premise of the story and I can't wait to see how you take it.
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