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By : metoo2
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 09, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ~*~Tasha~*~ on December 26, 2006
    I hope that you will decide to continue this story at some point in the future. I'd love to see how this one turns out.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - mada on February 03, 2005
    YOU HAVE GOOD IDEAS. YOU NEED GRAMMAR, SPELLING, AND PUNCTUATION. TRY TO THINK A LITTLE DEEPER ABOUT HOW EACH CHARACTER ACTS AND WHAT THEY BELIEVE IN. HERMIONE SEEMS VERY DIFFERENT IN THIS STORY. I LOVE YOU IDEAS, THOUGH. YOU KEEP WORKING AT IT, AND YOU'LL HAVE A WONDERFUL FIC.
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  • From ANON - mada on February 03, 2005
    You have a quite hilarious spelling error. Hermione's mom would not have been inferNal, but inferTile.
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  • From ANON - ingvild on February 03, 2005
    Since you have already promised to improve your language, I will not complain too much about it. There is, however, another thing that gets to me:

    "they talked of ridding the world of all those that they deemed unnecessary"

    So they sat there, happily plotting genocide. And how exactly is this supposed to make us sympathise with them?

    Look, the death eaters killed muggle-born for no other reason than that they were muggle-born. No matter how biased history may be, that one fact stands. Malfoy even gloated about it in *Chamber of Secrets*. They tortured the Longbottoms. Voldemort tried to kill a baby.

    I agree that the Ministery of Magic was not perfect - their treatment of half-bloods and magical creatures attest to that. But at the end of *Order of the Phoenix*, they sent the captured Death Eaters to Azkaban. They did not execute them.

    And when Hermione's "real" mother listed up the only Pureblood families left, she seems to have left out

    Black
    Weasley
    Longbottom
    etc.

    Yes, it is a fascinating question how Voldemort could rise to power and lead a group of racist bastards when he himself was one of the people they looked down on. You would have been much better off exploring that issue, rather than writing this. And please, do not make the Death Eaters the nice guys. It is insulting to everyone who have ever experienced racism.
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  • From slygriff21 on February 02, 2005
    Awsome chapter! Update soon! How are the others going to react?

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Avanell on February 02, 2005
    Great new chapters! It was worth the wait...but still can't wait for the meeting with the rest of the golden trio :)
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 02, 2005
    Please keep the story going in the way it is headed. I am so tired of the "good" side winning, and this story has given me a great deal of hope that the real good side will win.
    Angel

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  • From ANON - stormy on February 02, 2005
    This could be a good story, however, you need to work on your grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. If you don't know how to do this properly, please get a beta reader to help you, OK?
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  • From ANON - Luke on January 22, 2005
    intresting idea for a story with a good starting plot spelling and grammer need some help possibly an editor.
    im willing to offer my time to assist you in the editing of your work. you may email it to me then ill fix it and send it back to you. email me or call me or text me seeing as how you know all of the above my love
    ooh that ryhmed
    love you
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  • From ANON - SFPANTHER on January 12, 2005
    All I can say IS WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! This story will keep my attention.. Please update soon and keep up to good work!!! *waits with baited breath for the next chapter...*
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  • From ANON - EmZ on January 11, 2005
    go for the beta, i know i prefer to wait a little longer for a quality story, cos i see the mistakes and get annoyed, and if there are enough mistakes then i wont read the fic
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