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  • From ANON - Innogen on January 11, 2005
    Still reading! Glad that Severus is happy; hope he lets Hermione soon. Don't want her to feel like she made a mistake!

    Innogen

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  • From ANON - laceyweasely on January 10, 2005
    I love the way you portrayed Snapes joy over having another child. His child. It was good how he came to Molly and Arthur. Don't let anyone tell you he's ooc. How do they know?

    The facade we all have in public is different from the one we have at home.


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  • From ANON - MoMalfoy on January 10, 2005
    omg a girl!!!!!!! i always thought Snape should have a girl... i could see him being that overprotective dad just like mine. lol awww i hope Hermione will be happy about this! because i know i am! :-) Mo
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  • From ANON - Jules on January 10, 2005
    Enjoying this story very much. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on January 09, 2005
    Good. I love complications in little packages. In the fictional world. In real life I'd go screaming in the streets.
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  • From ANON - MoMalfoy on January 09, 2005
    awwwww i really hope she's pregnant!! that'd be adorable... cant wait for the next update! :-) Mo
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  • From ANON - Innogen on January 09, 2005
    Hey! Glad I found this story again. Please keep writing it; it's greaat! Lots of issues and angst! -- Innogen

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  • From ANON - Laceyweasley on January 09, 2005
    Joy! She's pregnant.

    Great!
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  • From laceyweasley on January 08, 2005
    I like your story. I love the HG/SS pairing. I avidly read anything worth reading.


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  • From ANON - Brownrecluse on January 08, 2005
    So far, I can see a few inconsistencies, but overall, I think you have a great story and you're very good at tempting your reader with juuuust enough inference to keep 'em hooked. That's just goooood writing -- and it's very difficult, building something in this format. A work in progress is a very mutable thing ... just when you hit your stride in, say, chapter 7 or 8, when it starts to take on a life of its own, you'll discover a key piece of 'something' that should've gone into chapter 2 or 3. But hey, that's what rewriting and/or flashbacks are for! 739 hits and counting CAN'T be wrong! You've got something going on here, gal! Don't worry -- the reviews will come! I think most people don't review simply because it's easier to '5 star' a piece with one mousey-click than type, 'I liked it.' This is good! Keep going -- Ya hear me? KEEP GOING!
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  • From ANON - TaintedAngel on January 08, 2005
    Interesting story.
    I love Snape/Hermione!!! I thought i would take the time to reveiw as my story has alot of hits but only 1 reveiw and it is a bit dissapointing. :-) (mine is a true story) I look foward to see what happens next!!
    Tainted Angel xxx
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  • From jessicalynch on January 07, 2005
    ok, i'm really dumb. i did not see the next chapter button on my screen, and thought that there was only 1 chappie.(gives the computer a kick)poor ron.i wonder if he really will die in hbp.btw, who do you think it is?i think it's snape.
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  • From jessicalynch on January 07, 2005
    i wish i could sleep next to snape, even though i doubt we would get any sleeping done. if you are curious to see what's under snape's robes, rent the movie dark harbor.alan's nakie in it.so who died?harry?please post again soon!
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  • From ANON - Mirina on January 07, 2005
    I think it's a wonderful story and i'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapters. I've discovered that when I feel downhearted about reviews I look at the number of hits my story has....most people just don't want to take the time to write a review! If you ever need someone to look over your chapters or give you ideas...be a muse, whatever, send me an e-mail!

    mymissmochakitty@myway.com
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