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Reviews for Once Bitten, Twice Shy

By : Toxic
  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on November 30, 2005
    Spell checkers and grammar checkers on these new-fangled computers are idiots. I say that really and truly. Sequins, sequence, smequence, ha! You know, my spell checker, every single time, I swear it corrects "Draco Malfoy" to "Drano Malloy." Yeah, like that makes SO much more sense, right? Pbbbbt, Auntie has threatened to reprogram her computer with an axe more than once, because she doesn't want to write about "Hairy Poker" but "Harry Potter." Then there's Draco's father, "Lucious Malloy" and his alter ego, "Lucious Maloney" with his cousin, "Baloney/Bologna/Gorganzola." I don't know where the hell that came from, but I think those folks who write the programs for our checkers either have a very strange and twisted sense of humor, or never read "The Little English Handbook."
    By the way, this story is fascinating, and I'm enjoying it greatly (Or I wouldn't have read it this long) and I have long learned to read around spelling mistakes. As long as the story is good, I can live with it. Can't wait for the next installment! More more more!
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 30, 2005
    *Sighs* Nice chapter. Aww, all this romantic tension is addicting. I definitely enjoy the writing and the pace of the story. And thank goodness you've actually made this more about romance (plot) than a pure smutfess. Not that there is anything wrong with that... ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dani on November 30, 2005
    I wanted to tell you I love this story and anxiously await all updates. (And I can handle a few typos) lol. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - angel on November 30, 2005
    ahhh how sweet ... please please update soon i would love to read more ....later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on November 30, 2005
    More please!!! Really nice story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2005
    you do use incorrect grammer sometimes

    I noticed that you used 'i seen' instead of saw and i was gonna scream (that is only beacuse i have a friend who says that)

    and you said breath instead of breathe


    But generally your story is not too bad
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  • From ANON - cherie on November 30, 2005
    Hey, I have been watching this story for awhile, I love it!!! I can't wait to see what happens between them. So far it is hot!! Between you and me, people who fuss about mistakes, have WAY to much time on their hands. This is fun and interesting and entertaining let's not turn it into English report.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2005
    yeah were sooooo close.... i think mione has more feeling for him now then she did be for and she does have the memory of them on the couch and him jerking off to her memory of him helping her ...... i cant wait in till the next update ..in till then keep up the awesome work ..later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on November 29, 2005
    I can't believe some1 jumped on you for '1' mistake, geez. Your updates are much appreciated by *this* loyal reader. Can't wait till next chapter ^^

    ~Night Shade
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 29, 2005
    Whew! That last chapter was hot and sexy. I definitely can't wait to read more. Remus and Hermione rock!
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on November 27, 2005
    yay! i liked this chappy, thnx for updating again ^.^

    ~Night Shade
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  • From ANON - Dani on November 27, 2005
    I must say I really am enjoying this story. This is the first Lupin/Hermione story I've read, and it's very good. Keep up the good work, and I hope you post updates soon!
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  • From ANON - angel on November 27, 2005
    ~lol~ well boy she has been spending a lot of time with him ....and they are closer now ....please please update sooon i would love to read more ..keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Night Shade on November 26, 2005
    I really love your fic and I hope you'll update ASAP.

    Cheers,
    Night Shade
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  • From ANON - angel on November 26, 2005
    yeahhhhhh for the update .... hmmm ....is remus going to take a eye on mione ...and does mione have felling for remus ...please update soon i would love to read what will happen next ... keep up the wonderful work and later for now

    angel
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