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Reviews for Once in a Blue Moon

By : seekersplayrough
  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 19, 2005

    I am very sad that you feel the need to re-edit your work. I love your story, and am very happy that you have taken the time to write. I am not a writer (cant to save my life *smile*) I design for a living and understand how hard it is to keep creating when you are receiving negative feedback about your work. I feel that the readers that are criticizing you should offer to help you out or find someone that can beside the negative.

    What I have enjoyed about your story is the laid-back, living together, atmosphere of the three men. I love the laughing the most. The contentment of the shared bed together between hp/ss was nice with out a mushy Snape. I am looking forward to see what you will come up with for the school term, that should prove to be entertaining.

    I almost forgot love the list of hate you/like you
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  • From ANON - piggles on May 19, 2005
    who cares about the damn grammar so long as you keep updating!!! and if these people are so good at grammar then can't they just correct it in their head and move on?? sheesh!!
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  • From ANON - cat on May 19, 2005
    so cute!
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  • From ANON - Padfoot!!! on May 18, 2005
    Awwww! Monsieur Lenny! Merci beacoup ma petite chou-chou! ^_^ *riddled with spelling mistakes*
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 18, 2005
    Aww a kitty, how adorable. I like the idea of the three of them having such a lovely care free outing and now I must go as I need to have ice cream lol.

    Hugs

    Kat
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  • From AbandonedAccount666 on May 18, 2005
    XD;;; Forgot to say this:

    I'm curious about cockroach-crunch icecream. O_O I wonder if it's any good...
    And YAY for cookies and cream! XD Though I like chocolate chip cookie dough beter. XD
    And what's a lime lolly? OO;;
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  • From AbandonedAccount666 on May 18, 2005
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Sevvy gave Harry a kitten!!! =^-^= Oooooo! What's he gonna name her? =^.^=


    *shies away from you, as you eat your eggs and toast, turning a light shade of green* ...ugh...X_X

    ^^ Oooo! Lemme help! *joins you in making 'evil' plans against her family*

    I'm glad you updated! =^-^=

    Oooo! I FINALLY figured out how to use my recomended reading section! Go check it out! *wink*

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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 17, 2005
    Lascivious Lime Lolly???? Only for Severus!!! lol

    The Cockroach Crunch was made for Draco, clever idea!

    Awwww, a birthday present for Harry and a soft, cuddly kitten, no less. STEP ONE: Severus starts his insinuation into Harry's life and love.

    What about the Ice Cream Cart man, I don't trust him. Is he a spy? or something??????

    Thanks for the Reviewers response. It's really great that the authors stay in touch with all their reviewers, even though it can be a lengthy process. We love you too!

    O.k., now, longer and more story please.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on May 17, 2005
    How sweet. We just got a kitten too, all black. Good chapter,but please make them longer next time, you are teasing.

    cdk
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 17, 2005
    Aww!!! That was ADORABLE! I loved that chapter! Thank you

    Love it So!!! More chocolates for you and your lovely muse! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2005
    See, this is the reason why authors need to adhere to basic standards of grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Your story might be quite good. I wouldn't know, because I can't stand to read it. What put me off? "fllubberworm puss" in the first chapter. It's 'flobberworm', and 'pus' and it's bubotubers that make pus in the Harry Potter universe. Three mistakes in two words has got to be some kind of record. Not willing to write this story off quite yet, I skim a few more chapters. There's a veritable plague of typos. The characters are unrecognizable. In chapter 26, I was treated to a chunk of dialogue in which Harry and Draco engage in infantile squabbling more suited to five year-olds. If that weren't enough, the dialogue is broken only by single paragraph breaks instead of double, thereby guaranteeing a migraine inside of ten minutes.

    If you want to improve your story, get a beta. Not someone who will tell you it's fabulous and she's dying to read more, but someone who can tell the difference between 'latter' and 'later' and is willing to correct you. Someone who can fix your dialogue issues and knows when (not) to use a comma.

    And if you want to fix all the flubbed Harry Potter details, I highly recommend the Harry Potter Lexicon. It's even great for ideas. http://www.hp-lexicon.org/

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  • From ANON - jess on May 16, 2005
    ths is wonderful really funny and all that add in whatever complaments you would like
    poor harry and his first hangover
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  • From ANON - gerjanne on May 16, 2005
    LOL!!!
    Like it like it like it like it!!!
    btw, this is the first story in which i don't mind short chapters :P as long as you keep updating often i don't mind at all :D
    please continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - padfoot on May 08, 2005
    *squee*

    Heh heh, I love the part when Draco was like, "one fourteen in the afternoon..." I do that all the time on the weekend, when my dad wakes me up. I yell at him not to wake me up so early, when it's really about 3pm. Pfft. I'm a dork. ^_^

    Can't wait for more, my dear Prongsy!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 06, 2005
    Yes, a new chapter, as I climb down from the cliff, very carefully. I guess the hangover potion needs to settle a bit before it really works, right? Hmmmm, Harry with a hangover, what fun is that. No, No, you must make him better or Draco will just pout all day. No way to make someone trust you with a hangover raging in your gut.

    Now, How will Severus get Harry to trust him.......Oh the possibilities.......Yummy stuff.

    Please post soon and no more short chapters. If you do write short ones, have 3 or 4 posted at once. Then I won't get mad, or anything......hehehehehe

    Pushy? Not me!!!
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