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Reviews for The Unfortunates

By : Grill
  • From ANON - Ailo on June 03, 2005
    I've been loving this story for quite some time now and look forward to the next chapter as soon as you can get it out! This really is a wonderful story and you are doing a good job of keeping both Severus and Hermione in character in my opinion. Keep it up, I wait on needles until the next chapter :D

    ~Ailo
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on June 03, 2005
    ooooooooo, such longing. Good writing.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on June 02, 2005
    Yes! Another update arrives and, yes, you are right... Evil cliffie. Why didn't Hermione think before she wrote? You could cut the sexual tension with a knife. Can't wait for the next update :o)
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  • From on June 01, 2005
    Another beautiful chapter. I thought that one of the Malfoys would have walked in on her, while she was reading her bracelet, but thankfully they didn't. I can't wait to read when Hermione and Severus can be together for good.
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on June 01, 2005
    Oh, so lovely. Thank you for updating. I am so in love with this story :-)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 01, 2005
    Wonderfull as always....can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - hyarion on June 01, 2005
    EEEEE!! More please. I check for your updates daily and I get giddy when they finally arrive. I love your story, keep going!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on June 01, 2005
    So SS and HG are on texting terms now - I'm surprised I've never seen this idea in an HP fic before as I know a couple who started their relationship by texting. I am fascinated by the ghost and really want to know the full story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Fae on May 29, 2005
    Gorgeously written and just begging to be continued to which I hope you shall!
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on May 29, 2005
    I love it so far! I was really waiting for it to turn into a Snape and Hermione instead of Malfoy and Hermione. I hope that Snape and Hermione have another chance soon to act on their feelings.
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  • From ANON - Faith on May 25, 2005
    LOOOOVVVVVEEEEE it. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 24, 2005
    I did not hesitate to review :D I loved the last chapter! It's good to see Hermione thinking, and I hope to see her plotting soon. Update very soon! Please?!
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on May 24, 2005
    Boring? LOL. Far from it. I'm very glad that Hermione decided to continue with the kiss. You write the chemistry between Hermione and Severus very well, yet you're still keeping up the tension to keep the reader hooked. I can imagine Narcissa making Hermione's life hell but. I suppose i'll have to patiently wait for the next update to find out just how bad it's going to get for Hermione :o)
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  • From ANON - Ailo on May 24, 2005
    I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the beginning of it lol It was really amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't hold out on us long, I'm waiting in suspense until Hermione and Severus "chat" again hehe.

    ~Ailo
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 23, 2005
    Update timely, Narcissa scary, Snape sexy, Kiss erotic, Hermione's thoughts interesting. No complaints. Excellent work.
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