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Reviews for The Unfortunates

By : Grill
  • From Arabella on May 23, 2005
    I love Narcissa's character, and I really hope you play with her some more. She's a great rival to Hermione, no? :)
    I love the thought of Hermione and Snape making out -- the beginnings of their relationships are always the best. Keep writing Grille - you have many anxious readers. *hug*

    ~Bella
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  • From sevenew on May 11, 2005
    Wow, this story is absolutely incredible! It's so addicting and well written, and what I find to be so great is that you've really kept the characters from becoming OOC despite the complicated plot. It's really great and I'll just sit here and keep refreshing the page until you update :)
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  • From ANON - West FullMoon on May 10, 2005
    Please continue...! Or I might just go insane and stop functioning!!!! ...Seriously though, very good plot! Dun, dun, dun! Claud Avery is alive????? Oh no!!!! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! What could HAPPEN???? The suspense! Superb story, by the way!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 10, 2005
    I'm stunned by this chapter actually. I was enjoying it and the plot was motoring along nicely until HG reached the Shrieking Shack and then... SS was just so cruel in his words - and HG kissed him back! I'm still trying to take that in! WHY would she kiss him back? Desperation for affection? A bastard she could trust amongst all the bastards that she couldn't trust? Sheer habit, after years of prostitution? I just feel that I need to know what HG was thinking of.
    I am really enjoying this fic BTW and always look out for your updates. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From on May 10, 2005
    I wanted to reach in and tare Lucius off of Hermione, but alas i can not. It seems Hermione likes it rough with oe man, but not the other. Hell if it was me, Severus could do anything to me.

    Truly, Madly, Deeply is a beautiful story, you really should see it.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 10, 2005
    Wow! What a great story, I love the plot line and the thought put into it. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on May 10, 2005
    Ah, such a teaser. At least we now know that the same (if not, more-intense) feelings are there. This is one of my favourite HG/SS being written at the moment. Please don't leave it too long before the next update :o)
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  • From ANON - laurlauraluraluralura on May 06, 2005
    SUP @ TOTAL "TRULY, MADLY, DEEPLY," MOVIE REFERENCE. ALAN RICKMAN PLAYS THE CELLO. I ORGASM. IT'S QUITE SELF-EXPLANATORY REALLY. UM, CHAPTERUPDATEPLZ.
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  • From Arabella on May 04, 2005
    Awesome chapter, Grill! I swear I was searching for the 'Next Chapter' link at the end, which is always a little disappointing when it's not there... But hey, it's worth the wait. :D Take care, and please keep writing!

    ~Bella
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 03, 2005
    Really enjoyed this latest chapter - of course Sev should play a musical instrument! Snape is meant to be a deep, dark fantasy man, isn't he? Good at music = good at sex in my book. Bach on the cello is a good choice - and, Oh yes, I can imagine how beautiful he'd look playing it - the instrument braced between his wide open legs, his fingertips delicately pressing the fretboard, head on one side, eyes half-closed and swaying gently with the bowing motion of his right arm. Fwooar!
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  • From ANON - killisandra on May 02, 2005
    you updated!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!! thank you so much. I look forward as to where this goes. thank you thank you thank you for updating......*does a jig* yipee
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on May 02, 2005
    I'm glad I came back to this. It is a great story. I love your Snape and I want to know more.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Golden on May 02, 2005
    Oh! It was brilliant once again! And I do agree with you. I can just see him playing the cello :) I like that trait of him though =9

    Keep up the great work, and pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase hurry with the next chappy?
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  • From ANON - divine angel on May 02, 2005
    You've seen Truly Madly Deeply, haven't you?! If not, it's one hell of a coincidence that you picked the exact same piece of music (and just happened to name it in such a "subtle" way!!) that Alan Rickman's character played in that. As cheesey as that was, a great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Branwen on May 02, 2005
    Malfoy's a little despreate.....is he really gonna let her keep her wand....oh well it could be worse
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