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Reviews for The Unfortunates

By : Grill
  • From ANON - lauralualrualshaw on April 29, 2005
    This story is amazing. I've read all the way through, and decided to wait until I came to the end (of the latest chapter) to post my review. Did I mentioned the adjective amazing? You write fluently, and it moves along with the story, which is key in fan-fictioning. Chopping stories just don't cut it. And since I have a ridiculous crush on Severus Snape, his attitude and character in your story is attractive as sin. AND I'M ALL ABOUT HOW YOU NEED TO GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT ASAP, PORFAVOR, GRASSYASS!
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  • From ANON - Akisis on April 24, 2005
    I absolutely love where you've taken this story, please keep writing and soon!
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  • From on April 23, 2005
    Poor Hermione - she is going back to the Lion's den but Malfoy knows that Hermione is connected with Mira now. I am really gripped by the ghost thing and am looking forward to finding out who or what it is. This chapter was really fascinating because it provided interesting hints of what's to come - with no waffle, in my opinion.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2005
    up-date, please! You left it on a sort of cliffhanger! Evilness!
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  • From Arabella on April 22, 2005
    *hi5* great chapter! i'm really anxious to see what is going to happen next. :)
    all the suspense - it makes me all giddy! LOL.
    Take care!
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  • From ANON - forge_underhill on April 17, 2005
    AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!! keep up the amazing work. i espesially loved the battle between the two in the "Hello professor, it's me"! I read it over and over...ahhh sooo funny!!!! hopefully more of those will be coming up....please!!!!!! can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2005
    MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lydia on April 17, 2005
    very nice chapter, not boring. I enjoy the friendship and the talks between Harry and Hermione, or any talks really, like bwtween Lupin and Snape. So... keep writing!
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  • From Arabella on April 16, 2005
    :) nice chapter! i especially liked the scene between Hermione and Harry - very sweet!

    Patiently awaiting the sparks between Snape and Hermione to fly {again},
    Bella.

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  • From ANON - dragon34 on April 16, 2005
    What could the silver orb be ? Will Hermione be going to Malfoy Manor now ?
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  • From on April 16, 2005
    I just love this story - especially Killengreen! Is that a ghost in the garden, freaking Sev out? Please, please keep up the good work. Is Hermione going to show some psychological damage from having been a prostitute? (I don't think Sev harmed her - probably whetted her appetite - hahaha).
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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 16, 2005
    I am so glad that you have been posting on here as well. I love this story and I hope that you can keep it going.
    Have been following this story on Fanfic and I am a bit upset that they cancelled this particular story. Glad to see it here. Hope you catch up to the other chapters soon. Will say no more....

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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 16, 2005
    I am so glad that you have been posting on here as well. I love this story and I hope that you can keep it going.


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  • From Rapunzel007 on April 15, 2005
    This is a fantastic story so far! I just read all thirteen chapters - I have much time on my hands - and I have fallen in love with your plot. But... why did you stop?

    - Blotted Ink
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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 15, 2005
    Another great chapter!!! I can't wait to read the next one!!!!
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