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By : Grill
  • From ANON - Faith on April 15, 2005
    Just as good as ever. And I'm glad to hear Hermione will br asking about her last name. That one has always made me wonder. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more.
    Faith
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  • From ANON - IDontExist on April 12, 2005
    DUDE MORE!
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  • From ANON - e.j on April 12, 2005
    ohh...nice going..very wicked...so snape might have fallen for hermione n so is draco...hmm...keep up the good work..hope u'll update it soon..
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  • From ANON - nicole boulet on April 11, 2005
    You've got a good command of the English language. Well written and compelling! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - killisandra on April 11, 2005
    you updated!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! *does a happy jig* thank you thank you thank you. I look forward to the next chapter but will wait patiently...pretty please update soon. *smiles* i like snape's reaction. I can't wait to hear harry's opinion of hermoine going into the dragon's cave to be a spy now that she is stable. will snape realize that he loves her? or will he fight it? ooh, fighting is fun...more passionate sex! sorry, just thinking out loud. Anyway, could you send me an email to let me know when you have updated? That would be really cool. Thanks again for writing..my email is: spunk93@hotmail.com...thanks i'd really appreciate it.
    Blessed Be,
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - lydia on April 09, 2005
    yay, this story is so fun! I'm glad you had Snape greasihaired, so many writers make him a broadshouldered pornstar.
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  • From ANON - Tasha on April 08, 2005
    No!...it can't stop there...lol...This is going so well...please write more...
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  • From Arabella on April 08, 2005
    Hey! Great chapter (times a million!). :) I really loved the scene when Hermione revealed herself to Snape - my eyes didn't move from the screen, lol. Keep writing, Grill - I think you have us all by the balls (or lack thereof). :D


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  • From on April 08, 2005
    Oh yea! She told him, and she's reunited with Harry. I hope they don't expect her to still go to the Malfoy's.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on April 07, 2005
    Another great installment of a really interesting story. I liked Sev thinking about Hermione's transformation for two whole minutes - I could just imagine the look on his face. Loved the flying scene - poor Sevvie. And now Hermione is safely back with her mates. She's obviously upset about Ron and the twins but she's got 23 more friends than before. "Killengreen" is a lovely scary name for a house - maybe Hermione could do some magical cleaning and decorating and make the house into a homely place for Sev. That might endear her to him a bit. (He's obviously got no house-elves).

    Nevertheless - now everyone will know that H has been a prostitute. How do you live that one down and make a man love you? I'm looking forward to finding out in your next episode.
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  • From ANON - Hathaldir on April 07, 2005
    I've really really been enjoying your story, a great AU (well, I guess we don't know if it is an AU yet, do we? who knows!). It's a really great premise and I'm enjoying it. There was just one thing in the most recent chapter; the use of vis-a-vis. I don't have either a French or an English dictionary nearby, but isn't 'via' the word to use there? Again, not certain, no reference books right now, who knows.
    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Faith on April 06, 2005
    Love it, love it, love it. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Love it, did i say that already. :)
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  • From ANON - Golden on April 06, 2005
    OoooOOOOOOOOH!
    Bloody, Brilliantly good! Ohmigosh! This is soooo wounderful!

    I myself don't really like long, contiinued out stories, and just preffer PWPs, LOVE this one! Oh, please, you must write more, and fast! I cannot survive....without...moooooooore.

    Btw, when shall we get to the smutt? ^_~

    :~Golden
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  • From ANON - destiny black on April 06, 2005
    That was amazing. I can't believe that Hermione revealed herself.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on April 06, 2005
    I'm so so so happy you let us get a bit of a payoff instead of dragging it out. I was afraid you would have Hermione holding off telling Snape and going to the Malfoy manor for six more chapters!! (I'll never doubt you again ;D ) Wonderful. Please keep going!!!! Love your writing.
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