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Reviews for The Unfortunates

By : Grill
  • From ANON - Rebekah on August 31, 2005
    OK - I have to admit that when I came onto this site I really wasn't expecting a lot. A bit of smut with no really good writing. For the most part, this has been true. However, I have to say that this story is fantastic. The writing is excellent, the storyline is exciting, the characters believable. I actually come onto the site every few days to check for updates (which I NEVER thought I'd do). This is a superb piece of work and I can't wait to see what happens in future installments.
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  • From ANON - Mira on August 29, 2005
    I think this story is so great, been stuck to the screen for ages! Also, I got the same name as Hermione's alter ego, lol
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  • From ANON - Darkness Divine on August 27, 2005
    I love your story, the plot line...the romance...the non-OOCness...sometimes...it's just a really great story in general. Please continue. When I got to chapter 26 and found I couldn't read any further I was so sad...it was a very sad day...
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  • From ANON - tastana on August 26, 2005
    i started reading the unfortunates on ff quite a while ago, i was so unbelievably annoyed when it was deleted! I only just found out about aff so you wouldn't believe how happy i was to find your story here! please update soon, I've missed your story for too long not to know what happens next. As for Higsley's sister, i must say that i haven't a clue what happened to her, i have my inclinations, as i'm sure everyone else does, but as to what actually happened, i shall have to be patient. whoever said patience is a virtue was either drunk, or had never read this story!
    a fan
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  • From ANON - gypsy on August 26, 2005
    damn...this guy just can't catch a break. don't keep ur loyal readers waiting to long, will ya?
    (great contrast in this ch.)
    @____-v
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  • From ANON - melody on August 25, 2005
    YEH! can not wait to finaly learn what this James Higsley has been going on about, and who 'she' is.... Dark past for snape has always been expected, but from the sounds of it (my interpertation) it sounds lie that because of Severus' death eater role he hurt 'her', perhaps killed 'her', which would eexplain her hauntings, on order of the dark lord.... corse i could be totaly off.... maybe he didn't like her reaction to his 'assiociations', or maybe (this would be a cool plot twist to me), she was sorta like Hermione, she had to do some bad thigns in order to save herself, then snape rescued her, only to have him in time be the greatest cause of her pain... perhaps it would be like.... suggestive foreshadowing on his new relationship which is why he is so grauded with her..... who knows.... im full of these sappy corny what-ifs.... But hey, if im right, cool! if not, nothing new! Im normal dead wrong about how stories turn out.... Well, PLEASE update soon!
    ~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
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  • From ANON - killisandra on August 25, 2005
    gah, i hate james hingsley already. thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - Jenn on August 25, 2005
    Yes!!! Yes! Yes! Intrigue abound!! This JAmes out for blood, willhe betray the Order to spite Severus? Or will he turn him over to get his revenge? This is getting very good....
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on August 24, 2005
    Can I truly hate and lover a person I don't even know? Is it possible. If so, then I hate and love you. The way you wrote Snape out to be. So...heartwrenching and god, when he said
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on August 24, 2005
    Another great chapter, of course. True, a bit uneventful, but no less enjoyable. And I'm sure that later chapters will make up for it, right? Anyway, great update, but please update soon! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2005
    This story is truely great, and i can see Severus opening up to Hermione soon whether he can help it or not. Please update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - BRIAN PEPPERS WILL MOLEST YOU......AGAIN!!! on August 19, 2005
    UPDATE SOON DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Melody on August 18, 2005
    This fanfic is like.... Wow..... I love this! You are my god... I would never be able to come up with this sort of plots and the like! I love your portrayal of Severus. During a few occasions it does seem a *bit* OOC for him, but other than that it seems that you have totaly captured the essence of snape.... if that makes sence X.X. the one charature I somewhat feel that you do not have such a good grasp on however is Harry, but that just might be because he is almost a minor characture, and i'm not used to that. I don't mean to offend though, everything else is soooo luffly, it more than makes up for it! Please update soon, I willl be waiting!
    ~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
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  • From ANON - killisandra on August 17, 2005
    YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you thank you thank you. I really and truly love your story. Can't wait for more.
    Blessed Be,
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - chelsea on August 17, 2005
    ahh!! once again i love it!! lol. yes i can be overly happy at sometimes but i love it!! lol. ok well keep it up and i love it. I just hope that he tells her soon. I can't take the anticipation!! lol ok
    much love
    chelsea
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